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It all started normal for Roy in forthcoming island.When Roys friend Rose asked him to go on a Adventure he said no at first then after a while he said ok.The next day Roys father asked him to do a simple task to pick up a box of stuff at the store, Roy tripped over and a glowing stone was in the box.As Roy was leaving the store a kid named anthony was there he was wearing lightning weights able to make him really fast  and knocked roy on the ground and he  Dropped a box, Anthony picked up the box and took out the glowing stone.And he shot Roy with a huge beam.Then the stone broke and 11 Peices flew around the world while you were holding the 12th Peice Roy was Teleported to one part of the world.While Roy was wondering when he was going to get home He Heard that he had to get 11 peices to return home, Now you play as Roy and Go on the long journey To return to forthcoming island.


Story So Far
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A girl Rose Makes you decide to go on a adventure then You finally Say ok then the day your leaving you get a note from your dad to pick up tools at the store when you leave a bully is there And you He has Lighting Weights on to make him really fast as he got fasts he hits you and For some reason decides to kill Roy He Almost Kills You The Stone Was Protection Then you wake up activate 3 switches and theres a girl named angela that looks like rose which doesn't bother you that much at the time and she gives you armour then you cross the bridge and you Open a chest and get your first Sword and then you Cut grass and Continue While the girl is there again and asks you how She asks you some questions and Then a blue devil appears and she kills it then 5 appear and you kill them for her which takes about 3 or 2 minutes then About 40 Appear and a Random guy appears and he kills them all You and The girl Angela And you get unconscious On the ground and then it rains and you hear someone saying get up Roy and it looks like your in heaven but its Called Memory Heaven So the person tells you that the stone brought you to this new world bla bla bla you need the 11 Peices to return home 1 year you have and If you dint do it fast enough you'll start to lose your memory. then You wake up in bed And theres like a king there and he says "For the boy to survive a holy flare that was directly
meant for him...The boy is something." "Well its best Let Him Rest...." Then Opening Credits Appear ... Which Isn't that long then You have a feeling were ever he goes a peice of the stone is so you go to the town hes in and, Theres a Blue Devil There And he finds a peice of the stone which is almost right in front of you and he takes it and transforms into a bigger devil (Which is the 1st boss but you don't fight him there) then he kills to people and runs away.Thats All Done right Now.Ill keep You Updated On more info.

Main Characters
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Name:Roy
Age:15
Description:The main character Of the game he is the one who Must Return home After finding the 11 Peices
First Weapon:Bronze Sword

Name:Loyd
Age:16
Description:None At the time
First Weapon:Flamberge(Upgradable)

Name:Angela
Age:15
Description:A Girl that looks exactly like rose From the Beginning?(No more description at the time)

If i decide to add more people i shall thats All me and my friend can think of right now.

ScreenShots
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This Is The First Battle


This Is you at Begining Talking to rose saying You dont like Boats But it Now Says
"Sorry Rose i'll get sea sick."


Here Is the Title Screen



Yes This is a turn taking game but until i can find a really good Abs itl Turn Taking I tried Editing Xas Abs But its mostly in Porteguese Or Something so i dont know how to add new items Ill Keep trying until I Figure Out
« Last Edit: October 08, 2007, 10:27:01 PM by Red Blood »


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thanks for dissing me but what about the main story?


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k i spilt up the thing into sections and corrected some stuff and should be easier to read


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Sorry; your story sucks. You have a terrible grasp on the english language, and there is nothing good I can say about the game so far.  ;9
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Yeah, you should consider making your sentences proper and not run-on. If english is a second language, then it's KINDA ok. However, your story is amazingly cliche and I have no idea the importance of the stone, this bully, wtf lightning weights are, why this kid is so god-damn important, or even where all the stone pieces apparated to. I mean, he broke them. So? they should all be on the ground.

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You Live on a small island and One Day at night time your friend wants to go on a adventure.

 So your Main character Roy Finally Says ok to Rose But then on the day You leave the Island You pick up tools from the store for your dad Which Had a stone with it.
 When You leave a bully anthony is really strong for  some reason and almost kills you And the stone breaks into 11 Peices

 While Wondering When He will return home Roy hears  the info that he Must have All 11 Piece's to the Stone So he can Have the Power to Return Home he has 1 Year But he will lose his memory if he doesn't do it fast enough.Now You Roy must go on a adventure to return home.

Mebbeh something like.


     On the peaceful island of Uon, lives a young boy. One day his father came to him, and asked him to complete a simple task. He wanted him to bring him a pakage that has been sent by an old friend. The boy and his friend Rose go to get the pakage. On their way home he trips and the pakage is opened, inside they find a strange stone.
     A great light dances from the stone and the world around them becomes dark. A low rumbbleing voice booms behind them "HUMANS? What are you humans doing here?" they are too scared to answer, because before them stands a mighty dragon "ha, is that how you got here?" he grabs the stone from the boy "I'll see to it that no more of you pests get into this world." with his mighty fist the dragon shatterd the stone and threw it. The dragon look at the boy "you are the one who made It, I just know it, I must make sure you never make another" the dragon's claw lowered gently to the boy's forehead.
     The boy could feel his memories slowy drifting from him, he had to find the pieces of stone, before he lost all his memories.



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Your spelling and grammar are terrible.

Your plot has no defined structure it just starts out with nothing.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dramatic_structure

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grammar
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Your spelling and grammar are terrible.

Your plot has no defined structure it just starts out with nothing.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dramatic_structure

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grammar

Ok i get the grammar But i told this is how it starts Some of this stuff sucks im gonna Change

Roy,What do you think its like outside of here outside
of Forthcoming Island. we can only walk so much in
this small island.

Ha, Stop trying to act like that but why do you
care, Is it bothering you Rose?

Roy, You dont know anything I wanna know if theres
other people .. are we a small race?

Yeah. But do you want to leave that bad?

It's just a question...

Roy, Lets go on a adventure!

Sorry Rose I get sea sick.

Oh Roy its always the same with you, Your just
afraid of leaving.

[sigh] Fine....if you really wanna go I guess i'll
come.

OK its decided,Tomorrow at sunset we'll go!

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Thats How it happens and Just wait till i have a short demo stuff will be edited and hopefully it will be acceptable for you guys

and sorry for acting gay in the 2 comments ago i was having a bad moment




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Your spelling and grammar are terrible.

Your plot has no defined structure it just starts out with nothing.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dramatic_structure

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grammar

I know, but I tried.  ;9

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Your spelling and grammar are terrible.

Your plot has no defined structure it just starts out with nothing.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dramatic_structure

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grammar

I know, but I tried.  ;9

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Your spelling and grammar are terrible.

Your plot has no defined structure it just starts out with nothing.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dramatic_structure

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grammar

I know, but I tried.  ;9

He was talking to me.

And this topic is getting off topic...


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Hrmmm maybe try harder on the storyline.

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Why was this transferred to the abandoned projects category without contacting me beforehand? I've slaved the last eight years of my life away and the journey is almost complete everyone! Soon you'll be able to experience Roy's journey home in astonishing first-person 3D - made possible with the RPG Maker suite!
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I'm not sure who moved it, but it probably happened years ago. :B

Moved to Projects in Progress, so we can experience the astonishing first-person 3D made possible with the RPG Maker...

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