Rate My Newest Character for My Newest Game!

[dracohaze]

So this is my first home made character for my new game...

Name: Law
Age: 23
Specialist: Swordsmanship; anything with a sharp edge...



Not yet finished...

[creepy]

I think it looks good i give it a 8/10

[Ramiro]

i liked it too, good job!!!!!!!
9/10!!!!!

[mangadude5760]

yeah friggin awesome! 9/10 keep up the good work!

[Season In The Abyss]

Not bad, 8/10 :evil:

[dracohaze]

Thanx for all the comments, I will eventually finish it, hadn't been on to finish it though ( and a little busy ), but thanx again for the comments, more would be welcome though

[Yossy]

The detail is excellent.  My only suggestion is to fix his hair... maybe the outline is too dark?  It stands out against the rest of it.  I think if you outline it with a dark (but not too dark) grey, it'll look better.  Or maybe add more gradient to it.

[dracohaze]

OK thx, I'll do that.

[biohazard]

yeah the hair has too dark an outline. its good, but he seems a little bit evilish for a hero.

[neosiris]

I love the Design of the character, Visualy. I would work on the personality. I thin kall ahcaracters should have thier own personality. (even though my Game doesnt show it terribly well)