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Title: Rate My Newest Character for My Newest Game!
Post by: dracohaze on December 03, 2005, 03:29:25 AM

So this is my first home made character for my new game...

Name: Law
Age: 23
Specialist: Swordsmanship; anything with a sharp edge...

(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg228.imageshack.us%2Fimg228%2F3001%2Fanimedudecharset1ja.th.png&hash=423505fd6354a92292397dd5a2fdb0a10c2f6525) (http://img228.imageshack.us/my.php?image=animedudecharset1ja.png)

Not yet finished...

Title: Rate My Newest Character for My Newest Game!
Post by: creepy on December 03, 2005, 05:55:58 AM

I think it looks good i give it a 8/10

Title: Rate My Newest Character for My Newest Game!
Post by: Ramiro on December 03, 2005, 01:29:51 PM

i liked it too, good job!!!!!!!
9/10!!!!!

Title: Rate My Newest Character for My Newest Game!
Post by: mangadude5760 on December 03, 2005, 04:47:19 PM

yeah friggin awesome! 9/10 keep up the good work!

Title: Rate My Newest Character for My Newest Game!
Post by: Season In The Abyss on December 03, 2005, 06:33:53 PM

Not bad, 8/10 :evil:

Title: Rate My Newest Character for My Newest Game!
Post by: dracohaze on December 05, 2005, 03:11:39 PM

Thanx for all the comments, I will eventually finish it, hadn't been on to finish it though ( and a little busy ), but thanx again for the comments, more would be welcome though :D

(https://rmrk.net/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimg221.imageshack.us%2Fimg221%2F4904%2Fanimedudecharset9nm.th.png&hash=5c84828668909da813212f2caead8560bd4a5a5e) (http://img221.imageshack.us/my.php?image=animedudecharset9nm.png)

Title: Rate My Newest Character for My Newest Game!
Post by: Yossy on December 06, 2005, 01:23:50 AM

The detail is excellent.  My only suggestion is to fix his hair... maybe the outline is too dark?  It stands out against the rest of it.  I think if you outline it with a dark (but not too dark) grey, it'll look better.  Or maybe add more gradient to it.

Title: Rate My Newest Character for My Newest Game!
Post by: dracohaze on December 06, 2005, 11:22:05 AM

OK thx, I'll do that.

Title: Rate My Newest Character for My Newest Game!
Post by: biohazard on December 10, 2005, 12:55:22 PM

yeah the hair has too dark an outline. its good, but he seems a little bit evilish for a hero.

Title: Rate My Newest Character for My Newest Game!
Post by: neosiris on December 10, 2005, 06:09:43 PM

I love the Design of the character, Visualy. I would work on the personality. I thin kall ahcaracters should have thier own personality. (even though my Game doesnt show it terribly well)