[RMVXACE] Town of Illustive episode 1

[jomarcenter]

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Introduction :
An empty town mysteriously appears on Halloween night. A group of students from Falica High School dare to enter the town and solve the mystery.

Mysteries, ghosts, zombies - you name it. This town is filled with stories and magic that you cannot find in the outside world. But why is the town filled with such otherworldly mysteries? And how will they be solved?

Episode 1
Location:
A group of three students from Falica High School have summoned the courage to enter a haunted house, formally owned by a rich pervert named Steven and his whorish mistress Mary, who both died a few years ago. They now make the house their haunt. Anyone who enters the house and is caught by the Ghost of Mary will take her place.

Screen shot
http://rpgmaker.net/games/5592/images/

Completion date: 10/28/2013
Mystery:
Discover the truth behind the ghost story, where no-one who has entered the house on Halloween night has ever returned alive.

Episode Themes:
- Ghost Story
- Halloween Comedy
- Absolutely whacked out story
Content Rating: Teen (contains supernatural horror elements)

Trailer
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W6EyrUAXCUU

Download
The game is already available but for non RPGMakerweb user
we are still in the process of uploading episode 1 via Desura
If you can please wait a while until the game is uploaded
if you are inpatient like everyone else you can download it via mediafire
or Rpg maker web. But we recommended to wait for desura version to be
release as this can quickly help up and you in version updates.

Rpg maker web link
http://rpgmaker.net/games/5592/downloads/

Mediafire link
http://www.mediafire.com/download/ebccbvu4bhv7w7v/Town_of_Illustive_ep1_v1.0C.exe

Desura link
To be release

Town of Illustive is copyrighted by Jomarcenter Studio.


This series consists of a series of episodes, each different in nature. This is only the first episode.

18-13-18-11 1-14-4 3-18-1-14-11-5-25-5 9-19 8-9-4-9-14-7 19-15-13-5-20-8-9-14-7 10-21-19-20 10-15-11-9-14-7

Logo Font: Never, by Matthew Welch.

[spoiler]If this game have redeeming myself can I get my Zero to hero award now.[/spoiler]

[strike]

hello jomar

[Acolyte]

From what I can see, your English has gotten a bit better and I commend you for that.
However, you're still wasting your effort making these silly "OFFICIAL JOMARCENTER ASSOCIATION CONTENT" things. It makes your thread confusing and unprofessional-looking. You're one guy, not a company. We know this. It's perfectly fine to make games on your own. You don't have to pretend you're a big company.

As for the game itself, I'm a bit confused. Is it finished?

[EvilM00s]

Agreed, I am similarly confused. And I will also remark that while your English is WAY better than it was the first time around, there are still several errors which may make the dialogue in your game difficult to understand. Perhaps you can obtain help from someone close to you who has a better command of the language.

Also, just a recommendation: change the name of the High School. Every time I see "Falica" I read "Fail" or "Fellatio". It's just too similar, and may draw negative feedback.

[jomarcenter]

From what I can see, your English has gotten a bit better and I commend you for that.
However, you're still wasting your effort making these silly "OFFICIAL JOMARCENTER ASSOCIATION CONTENT" things. It makes your thread confusing and unprofessional-looking. You're one guy, not a company. We know this. It's perfectly fine to make games on your own. You don't have to pretend you're a big company.

As for the game itself, I'm a bit confused. Is it finished?

Episode 1 is already finished. Episode 2 will be in the work by next year.

Agreed, I am similarly confused. And I will also remark that while your English is WAY better than it was the first time around, there are still several errors which may make the dialogue in your game difficult to understand. Perhaps you can obtain help from someone close to you who has a better command of the language.

Also, just a recommendation: change the name of the High School. Every time I see "Falica" I read "Fail" or "Fellatio". It's just too similar, and may draw negative feedback.

... I already have someone helping me with the English editing dialogue (You already seen his name in the credit)
And I already tested the game before releasing and I didn't see any problem with the dialogue.

Anyhow I not the one who check for grammar and spelling errors this time. But I still work on the dialogue.
And this is the only single complain that I received for this kind of problem (out of 200+ users) I will set this aside until I got more complains from others.

And also the same person will be doing the same thing for episode 2.

... And I cannot tell you why the school is named "Falica" but see if in future episode it will be explained.

[yuyu!]

Hello all of you I became active if I'm active and have a knife with all of your name on it you know what that means... REVENGE!

[Acolyte]

He must have really small handwriting.
I don't even think roph's full name would fit on a knife. He has like five middle names.

[Sophist]

If this game have redeeming myself can I get my Zero to hero award now.

[Sophist]

(james spencer dolphin are the three middle names)

[EvilM00s]

Jomarcenter, I'm going to be blunt here- you don't take criticism well. I would advise that you try; I was not trying to be mean or hurt your feelings, that was honest feedback. As it is, we're all being awfully tolerant of being being told there is a knife with all of our names on it.

I hope it all works out for you and I'll look at the game soon.

[yuyu!]

As it is, we're all being awfully tolerant of being being told there is a knife with all of our names on it.

I'm not.

I demand JUSTICE!

[EvilM00s]

I'm not.

I demand JUSTICE!

Uh-oh.

It be on, nao!

[Acolyte]

I demand JUSTICE!

okay what

[EvilM00s]

OH NO! THE ANGELS HAVE BEEN ANGERED! RUN FOR YOUR MISERABLE PATHETIC STUNTED LITTLE LIVES!

Was that over the top? Idunno why, I just felt like being a little dramatic.

[yuyu!]

A boy of his age could surely not be allowed to buy a knife as a weapon.

Clearly, the knife in question is a kitchen knife
which contains our names on it, without our consent
which is a sign of the knife is meant for us
which, a kitchen knife, is typically used for cooking
which means that he's trying to force us to cook for him
which is an act of sexist behavior!!

He's a SEXIST, of course!

[Sophist]

Dr Logic in the house.

[yuyu!]

All I had to do was connect the logic in my thoughts to allow new information to be born.

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hi im posting 2

[yuyu!]

Hey, Mr. Stark.

You should join team cereal.

Because: [Spoiler][/Spoiler]

[jomarcenter]

That knife thing is just a joke. It was just made as an advertisement attempt.
Well anyhow I am open for any feedback (and or criticism) as of now.

[pacdiggity]

Threatening to murder potential customers with a knife to exact some demented vengeance isn't really the best marketing scheme. Might I suggest a more welcoming death threat?

[AbsoluteIce]

This should be fairly interesting. Let's hope you finish this one, eh?

[yuyu!]

Well anyhow I am open for any feedback (and or criticism) as of now.

"As of now"? Well, snap.

The people earlier on in the thread should have waited until you were ready.

Threatening to murder potential customers with a knife to exact some demented vengeance isn't really the best marketing scheme. Might I suggest a more welcoming death threat?

I suggest poison. It makes them look just like they are sleeeeeeeeeping.

[Sophist]

Threatening to murder potential customers with a knife to exact some demented vengeance isn't really the best marketing scheme. Might I suggest a more welcoming death threat?