I KNEW IT!!!
Marisa will becomes enemy i KNEW IT!!! BRAVO!!! you are great!!
I like your story up until now!!
(I love Master Spark but not now, Instant Death....sob....)
especially :
Marisa-Alice event : Aya
(......I think my nose is bleeding
from the shear amount of material
this can give me...)
and Reimu-Cirno event :
(Where is my camera)
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and now for another sugesstion so far:
Event Easy or Hard :
1.Can you giva a choice between them...
i choose the wrong one (hard) and it didn't give me a chance to run for easier path
it's better to player to know and choose what path are they played...
and after choosing, i suggest to close for warp into world map...
because, when i try it, i can EXP&item farming from fighting Rumia and then fighting Mystia and then back to easy
path... so if you close the "teleport" to world map just for this event, i'm sure it will give impression that
"Rescueing Rumia/Mystia is much important now"-like
2.When Rumia and Mystia's hyptnotiz came off and rumia/mystya said that they want to help you..
better change the BGM with cirno one in boss battle so we can see they are really pumped up for assist you...
Event Marisa :
1.The Gap still open even the sound of closing gap is heard (i know this sentence is wrong, sorry for bad english)
2.and another suggestion on marisa event, when marisa caught alice (when serious conversation, not aya's joke)
how about give "Love Coulored Master Spark" BGM, so we can heard marisa do her best at stoping alice
and makes the event more touching...and ended with fade.. maybe 3-4 seconds
Event China... I mean, Hong Meirin :
When She joined party, she moves too much...
she walked throught reimu and suddenly dissapear two or three box behind reimu...
Event SDM...about Patchi's barrier
i will be good if you put
"need 4 key to turn off barrier" on koakuma's line
because i stuck when i think only 1 key needed...
(i knew from looked at "library door event" in RPG Maker)
(SDM mansion event now, after this event, i'll try to give another sugesstion... hehehehe)
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Now i locked at Patchi's Key...
i got 3 out of 4...
1.in backyard (same map as roof)
2.from vivid in roof
3.from lil girl in Remi's room...
4.
?
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That's all maybe...
Once again, Sorry for being a lot words, hehehe...
i really liked your works...