Kurasaki - CANCELED

[Kidkay]

(This is the long and boring intro you dont wanna see in the game.)Once Up on a time, the world was ridden in war. The mages of the magi came together to find a way to end the war, after weeks of congergateing they saw that there was no end. So they came up with 7 magic swordiens, theses swordiens sprad through the world and Haven seen the swordiens power the nations agreed to stop. The swordiens fell in to a dormant sleep. 300 years later A young Boy Named Nikku havening just lost a friend stoleway on a cargo ship hgeading for the captal. During his flight, the guards discover him. During his intargations monster attack. The captin of the ship a stubbron old goat gives your the swordien of Red Leaf, Rarurauxn. Heading up to the top deck you discover its in fested with Monsters Facing there leader and getting blown of the shop your adventure beguns from the House Auray.

Features

• Basic RTP
• Mini Games
• In-game Language
• Sub Quest and Sub Quest Rewards

Characters
Nikku[Main character] Age 16 Main character 
Kuristion[First Sub]Susposovely Dead, but has been sighted a lot of times in captial.
Kasumi[Second Main Character]Prisoner form the womans encampment.
Kimo[Second Sub Character]He and Kuristion went in to war together but only him came back.

Links

• Demo

kurasaki.exe - 2.01MB

• Demo2       

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• Full Version

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• Full Version2

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Pictures
http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c203/ffsora/Pic1.jpg
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http://i28.photobucket.com/albums/c203/ffsora/pic6.jpg
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Images are rather big . . . .

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images would help the demo get downloaded:

Characters
Screenshots..

spelling mistakes:
"if you ever fell" should be feal

also a starting potion would help XD lol

[Kidkay]

Yea i know i posted it and was about to pm admin theni noticed i had no pics i took them and ther uploading now.

[ShellShocked]

Ok, good start. I like the use of the AMS (Peoples names in the boxes.) But, you must, must, MUST work on your mapping. Mapping is VERY important to a game, if you cant get it right, people will usally lose interest. Maybe you should work on your story aswell, one second he is being questioned and then he is given a weapon...Also, work on some of the spelling. But what I have played is a good start!

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Features

• Basic RTP

Um... I hope that your not bragging about using the basic RTP.... that is a bad thing, a really bad thing and it will be hard for people to take your game serious... [/list]

[Irock]

The mapping needs work. And Inq's World Map isn't "basic RTP"

[coolkid25344]

Um....im ushally a harsh reviewer...really harsh...but for your sake ill go easy...um i start with the good.

Good-
Mappings Okay I have seen alot worse alot...heck most of your maps are better than mine and many others so feel proud that your a great mapper.
Some good smaller effects like the changing of text color when its telling you what you need to do (I dont think half the people here know how to do that anyway)
Good incorporation of scripts (love the battlesystem)

Bad-
Well ok its boring to say the least possibly the worst cliched game ive ever seen no offense it just wouldent hold my intrest from the start.
Charecters dont go enough in depth you start and like 2 seconds after you start they found him then they all die and give him a weapon which he uses to fight a monster, things move way to quickly.
All around lack of quality, you have the mapping down spend some more time working on the game itself.

[Kidkay]

Awsome i got replies, things to work on and more crap to improve on . . . .

The mapping needs work. And Inq's World Map isn't "basic RTP"

Are you serious, its not. well some one got ripped. When I hit the install button it was there. And berore any one asks its clear that i have a registered version.

Features

• Basic RTP

Um... I hope that your not bragging about using the basic RTP.... that is a bad thing, a really bad thing and it will be hard for people to take your game serious... [/list]

One of these days iam gonna make the perfect rtp game.

I'll work on expanding the intro and having the first three Islands done.
to me its kinda funny. i got this Graph book full diagrams of how every place in the game should look but no events to put in them.
Well, thanks for the comments, more importantly thanks for playing.

[Kidkay]

As fun as it was making this i cant go on. I was based on my two best friends who recently stoped being friends. So now i am out of a story. (i am not that creative) well it was fun. . . .   Till Next Time. . .?

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aw. =[

good luck with your next game.

also PM a mod to move this to the abandoned game section.