Ok, good start. I like the use of the AMS (Peoples names in the boxes.) But, you must, must, MUST work on your mapping. Mapping is VERY important to a game, if you cant get it right, people will usally lose interest. Maybe you should work on your story aswell, one second he is being questioned and then he is given a weapon...Also, work on some of the spelling. But what I have played is a good start!