No need to apologize for double-posts!

Anyways...that looks much better! The proportions have certainly improved! I actually just got done sending a pm to you with artsy tips before I even looked at this thread. I think the shading is getting better, but the *"sun" trick might help out. I'm not shading expert, honestly (Dr. Mc is much better at that than I am).
*I think I explained the "sun" trick in the pm - I basically just draw a little sun where the light source is coming from and then shade lighter as I get closer to it.

It looks like you're already coloring it digitally - in which case, you're already ahead of the crowd. I can't tell you how much it helped me and my sister to switch to digital art. ;_;

Thank you very much. I'll try the sun technique.

Nicely done, Pinky. That looks so much better!
I could see like strange white outlines around him before.
The revamp is good, nice work.

Thank you bethesdacam! I'll do my best to take my time with the cut scenes and other characters. I started writing out the story so I don't forget what I want to do and will have better and more polished game.

You're getting better. Good job. 

I always learn best from example, so I thought I'd show you how I would shade the armor.



Try to think of everything in 3D. You want to create forms, not shapes.

Sorry if this reply was late I had my college classes 2PM to 8PM and it takes about an half hour to get home. Anyway thank you for showing me how to shade armor I greatly appreciate it.