skarvelia

It's criticism. Like, he should stop trying to format his posts if he doesn't know how. He should learn to post screenshots correctly. He should stop calling respected forum members assholes or eventually he'll get his ass chewed out by a raging robot, try learning grammar, stop being a whiney bitch, look at successful RPG XP games and learn how they map or pick up something from them, read and participate in tutorials to get better, learn to write stories, or in general learn the BARE BASICS of the program he's trying to use to make games. I think this last thing I listed should be the most important because if he doesn't understand shit about the program then it's impossible to help and explain anything to the kid if he doesn't understand the most basic terminology of the program. Oh, he should look at that topic because I know there's at least 1 topic that does that. He should also learn follow the rules of how to request things or post them in the right place or both. Both would be nice.

Granted, some of what I just said wasn't criticism, but still good points to be made for him.

Spoiler for:

He's still a cheese-whiz

Soo true, if he thinks this is amazing then he has another thing coming... He really should go and look at other peoples projects, or even a mapping tutorial...

Let's refrain from calling people poopy-faces, we are not third graders.

Mostly.

Fuck you guys, I brought graham crackers today.

I'm trying to make this juvenile. So that it's more entertaining

You know, being new to the forums and all, I'm glad my project AT LEAST met the requirements for posting...

You guys are so brutal, it's awesome.

Well, this kid has history for being a i'm not allowed to name call anymore

you know what? fuck u guys,i don't need all this,next version im posting on facebook so my friends who aren't all shitfaced cocksuckers can play it,so all of shut the fuck up you cunts,and my grammar is bad coz im only year 7

...only year 7? You mean you're only seven years old?

...only year 7? You mean you're only seven years old?

no,year 7 at school,u wang

I don't claim to know how the education system works in your country, but looking it up, wouldn't being year seven make you about 11 or 12 and thusly too young to even be on this forum in the first place?

Umm I am at year 9, and my English is decent, I think. I used to post on forums when I was year 7, though, and everyone thought my English was good. That was because I wanted to learn, and I welcomed criticism, not called everyone fags, wangs and told them to fuck off.

Seriously, instead of insulting us because we want to help you improve, listen to us. 

well u can all be much nicer in the way u say things,don't be wankers

WANKERSS!!!! GAHHH YOU GUYS SUCKK!!!11!!! ALKHOSDFKAH WAHHH

@philip1756 -   just take it easy kid, and pay attention...it's not easy to absorb the truth,
                     even when it's exactly the opposite of what you wanted to hear.

                   you are still learning..................................................learn from it.

                   if you're going to make games then the first thing you need to do is...
                   "stop making games for yourself, aim to please the player"

                   luckily your thread hasn't been ignored and you've been given honest feedback
                   from experienced members of the forum "free of charge"

                   instead of having an attitude and losing your cool from loaded comments that aren't so nice...
                   you should challenge yourself to impress everyone the next time you decide to post your work.
                   earn that respect and compliments for maximum effort.
                   
                   ~g

                   *fix the terrain id for your tribal cave... the actor can walk anywhere...

                   

@philip1756 -   just take it easy kid, and pay attention...it's not easy to absorb the truth,
                     even when it's exactly the opposite of what you wanted to hear.

                   you are still learning..................................................learn from it.

                   if you're going to make games then the first thing you need to do is...
                   "stop making games for yourself, aim to please the player"

                   luckily your thread hasn't been ignored and you've been given honest feedback
                   from experienced members of the forum "free of charge"

                   instead of having an attitude and losing your cool from loaded comments that aren't so nice...
                   you should challenge yourself to impress everyone the next time you decide to post your work.
                   earn that respect and compliments for maximum effort.
                   
                   ~g

                   *fix the terrain id for your tribal cave... the actor can walk anywhere...

                   

why the hell does grammar matter? if the game is good or ok,then that's enough,some people on these forums r real cunts (not you gameface101,ur ok,u haven't done anything)

Uh grammar matters because uh grammer uh makes you uh not a gay fish uh stuttering uh -

Grammar matters because if you make a "good game", how are we supposed to understand shit if your story is wrote like this:

"hero wrot donw name danand pissaid for a r-rr-r-ROOBY ROO RAGGY!!!"

We tried to talk nicely to you but you called us fags and some bad other things. And did you just give me a -rep just because I was trying to point that out to you?

Grammar matters. Why? Because it makes you look good, and it means you can speak well and in a good language. If your posts have good grammar, it means that your game has good grammar, too and is an understandable game. Good grammar is valuable.

And nobody here did anything to you, ok? We tried to help you, and you insulted us. Do you want us to continue being nice?

1) How old are you, kid?
2) Do you know any professional games that have "lol this game is good,u should play it"?

If he say's he's thirteen or something that's very surprising. I'm only ten, and I can make games 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000999999999999999999999999x better.

And grammar matters. I couldn't figure out what you were saying in your post.

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no more of my games are being posted on these forums due to the abuse i receive

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no more of my games are being posted on these forums due to the abuse i receive

...What? Abuse? We were only trying to help you and you say we abuse you? o-o

If you curse out people for pointing out flaws to your game and when they retaliate, you get butthurt and baww - THAT IS NOT ABUSE. YOU BROUGHT IT ON YOURSELF FOR NOT BEING ABLE TO TAKE CRITICISM.


EDIT: Edited out personal rage.

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no more of my games are being posted on these forums due to the abuse i receive

You insult us
You are immature
You have bad grammar
You are blaming us?

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no more of my games are being posted on these forums due to the abuse i receive

You insult us
You are immature
You have bad grammar
You are blaming us?

4 words
go to hell m8

You have just insulted a member. See what I mean?