skarvelia

[phillip1756]

this is my freeroam RPG called skarvelia(even though lal my games are freeroam).here is the demo http://megaupload.com/?d=LXLTVHIU



                                        the story
                               you start off as a pirate on a ship in the middle of the sea,there is a huge storm and the waves are thrashing
                               against the ship,your captain is hit by a wave and is swept out to sea,the same thing happens to you,your eyes close
                              and you're in complete darkness,when you wake up you're on a strange island...










                                                    the characters
                                       
                                                     name:(you get to choose the name)
                                                      gender:(you get to choose the gender)
                                                     age:21
                                                       bio:he/she lived their life as a pirate until washing up on a strange island changed his/her life forever





                                                       name:captain ovado
                                                        gender:male
                                                        age:48
                                                        bio:ovado jesfel had been a pirate since he was 3,when his father was attacked and killed,ovado took over
                                                         the  ship,the deadly siren.

                                                               
                                                            more characters to come soon...



                                                          features
                                                   you get options of what to say
                                                   character creation
                                                   different style battlers
                                                   house system
                                                   the ability to kick people out of your party



                                                     screenshots
                                                   
                                                   
                                                       
                                                         
                                                         




keep watching for more updates and for the next version...





                                                   

                                         

[Esmeralda]

Screenshots?

[phillip1756]

Screenshots?

dunno how,lol,anyway,trust me,it's awesomeness

[Zylos]

God fucking dammit, I don't even know where to begin with this.

Let's start with the obvious messed up format. Why oh why did you space your text out like that? I can't even tell if you were trying to center it or just felt like throwing in a shitload of spaces for no reason. Either way, it's annoying as hell. Next is your god awful spelling and general grammar. The only capital letters you used in the whole thing was to say RPG. Capitalize the first letter of every sentence, capitalize the first letter of a name, put a space after your commas, periods, and colons, and add a period to the end of your sentences. Just for starters.

To take a screenshot, just hold Shift and press the Print Screen button. This copies whatever's on your screen at that exact moment, and will allow you to paste it into your favorite image editor like MS Paint or something. This is important because I refuse to download any demo that does not have these. Who knows what crap you could put in there? It might be a virus or just a plain old shitty game, which it honestly is sounding like it is.

[Miss Nile]

Everything Zylos said. If you want us to play your game, post some screenshots and fix up the format and English skills. Because to be honest, no one would download a game with messed up lines and nothing to see at all.

Judging the content, though, you really should add more to your characters more than just a sentence. And the story is not detailed at all and is very old and cliched, although the idea of pirates in RPGs is a little rare. Seriously, work on your topic and maybe people will care to look then.

[Esmeralda]

I always download games with crappy grammar and no screenshots. They're usually really, really hilarious and bad. I was just expecting him to pull another Billybulltwat or Gate of Light on us but eh guess not

Anyways, shit game. Yeah, no criticism.

[phillip1756]

look asshole,u don't know if it's crap unless you play it

[Sophist]

They're talking about how your topic is crap, not your game.

Which I am speculating will be crap as well.

God fucking dammit, I don't even know where to begin with this.

My little Zylos is growing up to be just like Anski.

[phillip1756]

how do i do full screen? i wann od full screen on my game to take screenshots

[Grafikal]

ur stoooopid

[phillip1756]

your stupid.

see,u always delibarately start arguments,if no-one tells me how to do full screen i can't take screenshots can i?

[Esmeralda]

Alt + Print Screen will do it if it's windowed. Also I did download your game.

[Lazer Ki]

There's a RMXP Help File.

[Zylos]

Come on, this is the basic of the basics. Alt + Enter for fullscreen, Shift + Print Screen for a screenshot of the whole screen, Alt + Print Screen for a screenshot of just the current focused program. Fullscreen doesn't really matter though, your fullscreen screenshots would be the same size as a regular screenshot, so there's little point in using that as an excuse.

And if you think I'm an asshole, you really haven't seen the rest of RMRK bud.

[Lazer Ki]

So is this the GIANT PROJECT you were talking about?

[phillip1756]

So is this the GIANT PROJECT you were talking about?

no,but did u play it?

[Lazer Ki]

No, I haven't. I don't really have the time to.

[Redwyn]

...I am so amazed and in awe with this game.

SCREENSHOTS:

Best dialog EVER:
[spoiler][/spoiler]

Best MAPPING EVER:
[spoiler][/spoiler]

Best Battle System...Ever...
[spoiler][/spoiler]

Don't bother with this amazing game.

[Lazer Ki]

.... LOL

[Redwyn]

Redwyn, all but one of your images are broken.

LOL BATTLE SYSTEM LOL

Fixed, sorry. Imageshack is getting shittier and shittier. :\

[Miss Nile]

...I am so amazed and in awe with this game.

SCREENSHOTS:

Best dialog EVER:
[spoiler][/spoiler]

Best MAPPING EVER:
[spoiler][/spoiler]

Best Battle System...Ever...
[spoiler][/spoiler]

Don't bother with this amazing game.

I am so amazed! D:

....

No, seriously. And you call us assholes?

[Grafikal]

your stupid.

see,u always delibarately start arguments,if no-one tells me how to do full screen i can't take screenshots can i?

I wasn't arguing. I was calling you stupid. Stupid-head.

I'm trying to make this juvenile. So that it's more entertaining

[spoiler]You're still a whiner-puss  [/spoiler]
[spoiler=screenshots]these screenshots


are much better than what you posted Redwyn. I think you need to double-check the game you downloaded buddy, cause those are wrong [/spoiler]

[??????]

Whoa, I'm sorry, and I thought i was a horrible mapper... You should work on your grammer too. Have you seen any maps on this site? Do they look like what you have created? Hellllll no. You should try a little, no, a lot harder with your mapping...

[Grafikal]

He should try harder to not be a poopy-face

[Lazer Ki]

He should try harder to not be a poopy-face

Agreed. But aren't we getting off topic with this...?