I wouldn't worry about double-posting on your own threads. (I do it all the time >_<). Either way, I think it's better to double-post after a little bit to nab some attention, because if you just edit your post, no one can see the update. So, I actually recommend double-posting in this case, haha. xD
Okay, onto the feedback! I really like the image as a whole, but the logo does seem a little dark and unsetting...I would try making the text bigger (on the logo), and maybe more of a soft color for the text. I think the black part would do well as a lighter color. I'm a huge fan of big, fantasy, breath-taking images, so I give you a thumbs up for that! xD
Now, what I would suggest...hmm...maybe making a few of the faces into big, slightly visible images fading in the background. =o (rather than having them all clumped together, but that still looks pretty nice, too xD). That's really just a little recommendation.
Okay, thats cool then
Will put up "Update added" or something when I have something new to announce from now on, thanks for your enlightenment about that!
Ye I have thought a little bit about that aswell, but I have spent a pretty decent amount of time making the logo.. Since I dont have any good program to create fancy titles, I actually created it inside Sony Vegas Pro, because I have a decent amount of knowledge about that program. I agree that the text might be a bit hard to read, and a bit tiny so I definetely need to do something about that, and Im gonna play around some more in Sony vegas and see if I can make something out of it. Thanks for the thumb
I thought excactly about that when I started making the title-screen actually xD (Sometimes it feels that you can read my mind, haha!) But since the picture of the actors are cut off around their chests, it came out a bit odd to me. Actually I was thinking about having 2 of the characters in a bigger format, one to the left and one to the right of the screen, and with added opacity. But like I said because of the "cut off" I worked it into Its current state. You seem to have knowledge about this stuff, maybe you could help me out a bit?
Wait... WUT?
What am I being thanked for? Being nice and supportive?!?
Anyway... I like the look of this and I love how you gave us the history of the world without revealing anything about the ingame stuff Looking forward to playing this!!! But... I don't want to play any demo's (I have a hunch that I might want to keep playing and be mad because I can't )
Haha! Yes, that and for being a very nice motivator! You have given me alot of useful guidelines that has helped me out alot! Mainly in the "Keeping the spirit alive?.." thread that I started! When I think about it, most of the things you and other people wrote there gave me motivation to keep working on the project, and for that you should definetely have a big thanks!
Thanks alot, Ye I tried to give away a small history of what has happened before the actual game. You will get to know most of this stuff inside the game too, but Its just a small fragment of the legend and the backstory.
I have been thinking, and I might put the game out in chapters later on.. sadly that might just be the same, if you think you might be mad about wanting to play further (Which I would really be happy about if you wanted too in the first place
) Other than that I hope you will stay around for the full version, if you decide to wait
And I hope I will be faster in my progress, when I get more experience.
Thank you both for the feedback! Stay tuned for updates!