Guardian

[Kubara]

My New Project I'm working I just wanna know if the story is good or bad or if makes sense

Story
The World is now in the era of spiritual energy, it

[thatsmypie]

Hmm... sounds neat. Mayby a few screenies and some character should be put down! Mods are getting strict these days about how much content is posted about a game lol!

[haloOfTheSun]

I've actually been lenient on the rule. >_>

Just a screenshot will suffice, you've posted plenty of info (more than most people anyway), but we like to know that the project people post about is at least in the works, and not taking up space that a real project could be using. It makes other people's games go down the page and get lost forever.

So, even just a title screen shot will work.  :wink:  If you don't know how to take screenshots, read the "A Guide For Showing Pictures" Sticky here in this forum.

I voted for "Needs Work", but that's not a bad thing. I think it's good, you should just elaborate on the story more.

[loonygamer]

I've actually been lenient on the rule. >_>
So, even just a title screen shot will work.  :wink:  If you don't know how to take screenshots, read the "A Guide For Showing Pictures" Sticky here in this forum.

I voted for "Needs Work", but that's not a bad thing. I think it's good, you should just elaborate on the story more.

yes, "needs work" just means "IMPROVING." most people give it a negative connotation that kinda puts them down. nevertheless, it is still good.

[Demonheart]

another boy saves the world without screenshots...

[Kubara]

I havn't done anything "in" game I'm working a good story other wise if I had a bad story and I started the game, I would have to re-do it.

I Just wanted to know if its a good story line and where I need Improvments, If its in the wrong form can a mod move it?

[haloOfTheSun]

It's the right forum, we just require a screenshot. Even a title screen shot will work. I'll give you some a day or so to get at least SOMETHING ready, otherwise I'll have to lock it. But then you can PM me when you're ready for it to be unlocked, so don't worry too much.

[Kubara]

It's the right forum, we just require a screenshot. Even a title screen shot will work. I'll give you some a day or so to get at least SOMETHING ready, otherwise I'll have to lock it. But then you can PM me when you're ready for it to be unlocked, so don't worry too much.

Thanks I'll add a pic asap.

PS: Added something in Vocabuary and add a preview in character bio

[Kubara]

Add picture not really an SS but I hope it can slide ;P also added a little more info

[haloOfTheSun]

Add picture not really an SS but I hope it can slide ;P also added a little more info

Good enough for me.  :^^:

[Dalton]

Ooh another person who likes crusaders.

Not all that much info but eh it seems okay.

[Demonheart]

Now we are getting somewhere. Excellent Artwork :whoa:

[Deksumi]

It all sounds good Keep me with the info for this game and also when will you release a demo?