comments please

ok so i changed this guy


into that guy


i don't want to hear "10/10" i know it's not good, i need the artists to tell me what am i doing wrong so that next time it can be better , got that? good.

Ok, I won

Okay hope you not will be mad.

The horn thing look kind of strange its only one color and looks that they dont fit to the character. And there are some other little errors.

And then everything (excpect the face) looks like a lego char.
But then he is also quite cool.
I like seing him from the side

If you keep working you can get reall good.

Nice bluee

hmm...i see what you mean about the horns.. maybe i should have passed though i figured it will be more.. unique Oo

(you said some other little errors but didn't mention anything, mind pming me the list?)

lol lego char ^^
hmm sorta true though i guess.. i should make him look more humanlike...

and i agree, the sides look far better than the front and the back Xx

i don't want to hear "10/10"

11/10

your work is awsome!!

On the front the horns are wide and on the back the horns are cramped together.
I'd say that consistency is generally a good thing.

and on the sides they face the front too...
sadly i only noticed it when i felt like "meh no one will notice"

Interesting, not the best i've seen, but they are not the worst either. On the char with his back to you the horns look kinda wierd, mayby that should be changed.

Interesting, not the best i've seen, but they are not the worst either. On the char with his back to you the horns look kinda wierd, mayby that should be changed.

they are facing the front -.-
it's supposed to look like that  :roll:

Shading, shading, shading!!!! If you don't give your character some shading and contrast hes going to look flat and dull. There are of course other little problems... but this is the most important!! Get the shading down, then worry about other things.

ok use shades, dark colors as wel as lighter ones it will help it alot. also on the bottem on the 2nd to the left the sword is facing the wrong way.

oh and put some shades on the horns as well.

err,,he doesn't have a sword what the hell are you talking about?
(it's his hand and a shoulder armor thingy and it faces the quite normal direction Oo)

as for shading, maybe i shaded too much for you to notice -.-
adding any more shades simply won't let you see an image Xx
(take a X8 look, if you want fix 1 of the 16 chars to show me what you mean)

so what if its not a sword it is the wrong way its facing this way "/" while all the others are the obosite. (and im talking about the bottem ones the 2 to the left) im not hacking on you im just pointing out the mistack :|

oo you mean his belt thingy.. yeah now i see that Oo
(lol next time say "the line in the middle on his shirt, i thought you talked about the hand)

fixed:


redone horns and the belt.. the horns don't look too good now but at least they face the front.. sorta..