Rate My ship

This is my first shipmap using xp. So please could you rate it and give me some advice  just to say it is meant to be cluttered and the portholes to appear behind some obstacles when you are actually playing the game.

Cool man, wonderful ship!!!!!
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the back of the ship goes down too far it makes it look like its hudege but maybe you want it to look like that

Hye it looks Awesome!! Good job! I think this would help the back but dont do it if you want to it is your choice, put some water over the wood that might work

good work xcluding the front edge of the ship which seems a bit misplaced, you aren't going to get much of wind there since the body of the ship blocks it

In my gamr it is the only ever made 2 floor ship thats why the front edge looks like that to make it seem like it is on the lower level

oh i see, in that case, it's all good

Yeah in that case it rocks! Good Job!

Oh and My captains room what do you think

i think your windows are a bit too high placed and that weird 2sided lamp doesn't seem belong, otherwise it's good

Thanks man.

Yea, blue is right, modify this and it

That's awesome, man!
But then again I'm no critic... >_>
Might I inquire as to where you got your tileset from?

Like it, no questions about it. I'd say you know how to map.

That's awesome, man!
But then again I'm no critic... >_>
Might I inquire as to where you got your tileset from?

this topic is old, these members don't come here anymore.
and that is a tileset that comes with RPG Maker XP.

yo dat iz hot......

Both really cool. I wish i could make a ship at all >.<

actually i do and thanks for the comments on my ship.
but that account got mucked up dont know why but yeah.
thanks for the comments

It's pretty cool... I like the level of detail you have, Making a ship I think is one of the hardest tile sets to work with... (+Rep)

im good at designing like small rooms and small areas.
thats why many of the cities and dungeons i make are cut up into small sections.
i usually get bored or become a little tired when making big maps.

Why are there two masts next to each other supporting the same sail?

Also, the sails are going to need to be much bigger if they're going to support that big ship.

you see where the stumps end?
well they are actually going on further so there are more masts etc.
its just i saw the design in another game and liked it.

The front isn't good it looks too "fat". Apart from that it looks nice, except for the fact you used RTP.