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[Writing] After It All

Started by threeofspades, March 19, 2012, 02:04:53 AM

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threeofspades

March 19, 2012, 02:04:53 AM Last Edit: May 25, 2015, 09:30:14 AM by boe
This is a short story That I wrote for another site called Sullen Riot. It's about Green Day but that is what that site is about so...
Tell me what you guys think kay?!
It's a good year when you win an award and give a name to a beer. But you have to make up a sex position to complete it. That would be the Bullwinkle.
     -Tre Cool

haloOfTheSun

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March 19, 2012, 07:04:07 AM
This was completely different than I was expecting lol ;o

I really liked it! I already told you what I thought about it though, and I'm not a writer so I can't really critique but I did notice some grammatical errors. Oh, you and your typos :P
:tinysmile:

Relenzo2

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August 08, 2012, 04:27:32 PM
Yes. You have potential, and solidity. But the foremost thing I would say is that you have a long way to walk along the road of grammer and sentence structure. A long, long way.
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