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Galenia: Dreams of Al dais

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Galenia: Dreams of Al dias

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I am back again and I just want to say that the project is going fine and a total revamp of the story is underway. New features will be added to Demo 2.0 such as a forging system and much more. We are still in the recruiting process of scripters, Mappers, and spritters so if you are interested feel free to contact me.

Galenia: Dreams of Al dias Story

Intro

What are dream's? Could a human being live without them? Or could our dream's be the central element of what makes us human? I am trapped in a world that is considered a dream but somewhat a reality. I feel pain, love, suffering, and commitment from others in this dream. But I wonder if I will ever wake up someday.

Background Story

 Long ago, in a world called Al dais lived a Supernatural being known as the Oracle of Dreams. She protects and purifies the dreams from the nightmares that shroud the hearts of the innocent. Al dais is a world that uses the dreams as a source of energy called Aura the life stream which allows the planet to survive. If an imbalance between nightmares and dreams were to occur, Al dais would fade from existence. The Great Oracle knew it would be too much for her to handle alone, so she had selected seven chosen individuals and granted them with the ability to travel the dream world to aid her in dream purification.  The Oracle couldn’t entrust anyone with this power so she had chosen people who had a pure of heart and handed them seven Medallions known as the Elements of Dreams, which acts as a symbol of her power given to the seven individuals.

   The Oracle of Dreams have referred to them as the Guardian’s of Dreams and for many years the balance between nightmares and dreams were adjoined perfectly. Until one of the seven Guardian’s of Dreams became plagued with the heart of greed and wanted more power to even be able to challenge the Oracle herself. His name was Malecai, and he sought out to destroy the other six Guardians in order to retrieve the other Medallions to become a being capable of becoming more powerful than the Oracle. Malecai had manage to kill five of the Guardians but there was one left who continued to stand and fight, his name was Alen Grayfield.  Malecai having the other five medallions at his disposal, he transformed into a Demonic being known as the Aura Beast.

   Alen couldn’t defeat Malecai for he was outmatched by his power. In a desperate attempt to save Al dais the Oracle of Dreams had used herself as piercing edge for Alen to use as a weapon to defeat Malecai. Al dais was saved at the cost of the Oracles life but the last words she left to the world “Children you must continue to maintain the balance of our world for that I am no longer here to protect you from the nightmares that drains the Aura from the planets life stream. Every500 years, chosen individuals with a pure of heart must carry the dreams of the people to the seven Temples of Al dias that I left behind as a vessel to continue the balancing cycle of our world.”

500 years has passed and the Journey of Dreams has begun……


Main Characters



Roland Grayfield
Age: 21
Birthplace: Argus Town 
Bio: Roland is a young man gifted with the ability to travel the world of Dreams.  He lives with his grandfather Norman Grayfield, Mayor of Argus Town who has been taking care of him since the death of his mother and father.  Roland is now of age to receive his family treasure known as the Element of Dreams, which has been passed down through generation to generation that his grandfather been holding for his 21st birthday.  Growing up, Yunie and Ryuko who are childhood friends of Roland and are important allies in his Journey of Dreams.




Yunie Cohen
Age: 20
Birthplace: Argus Town
Bio: Yunie was born and raised as a White AuraCaster to protect the Dream Holder on his or her journey.  She lives with her older sister Clara who is always protective over her, and wishes the best for her when she began her journey of Dreams.  Yunie has a strong bond with Roland and Ryuko who are both her childhood friends but the relationship she has with Roland has been deeply entwined with one another that Ryuko can’t seem to understand.



Marabeth Gesinberg
Age: 24
Birthplace: Sumi Village
Bio:  Marabeth is the daughter of the Great Hibachi of Sumi Village.  Her Samurai skills are recognized by many invaders who come to steal the dreams from her village.  Marabeth is not much of a social person and hardly smiles to be polite.  She is well informed with current events of Al dais and is very critical of other people actions.  She is the first woman of her family who wants to receive the mark of the Shaman which is a sacred mark past through many generations of the Hibachi family. She tries to make her father recognize her as an equal of the family and realizes that it will take many trials and dedication to gain approval from him




Leon Attin
Age: 25
Birthplace: Port Richmond
Bio: Leon Attin is a Dream Stealer who is in debt to a small group of thieves called Fox Bandits. His Father was a member of this Organization but was killed during an important Smuggling mission which cost the Fox Bandits an extreme price which couldn’t be paid in full. Leon was entitled to work off his father’s debt to gain his freedom.




Von Dagen
Age: 28
Birthplace: Degen Village
Bio:  Von was once a Dream Guardian of his village until one day an army of Dream Wraiths attack Degen village.  Von held off the enemy as long as he could but Khan, leader of the Wraith attack had the Dream Holder in his grasp.  The Dream Holder was Von’s engaged fiancé, she was killed and the dream orb was taken away from the village.  Since then Von became a Dream Hunter to track down his village Dream Orb his Fiancé once possessed. Von has a heart of Justice and vengeance, hoping someday he will kill Khan for the sacrifices he had to make in order to save his people.




Zhia Kless
Age: 18 
Birthplace: Selisia Kingdom
Bio: Zhia is the Dream Forger of the Selisia Kingdom and cousin of Von Dagen.  Her Dream Forging abilities are the best throughout the continent of Nelm.  Zhia is a thrill seeker who constantly stays in mischief and her attitude is different compared to an average dream forger.  People of Selisia Kingdom can’t stand her because of her silly behavior.   



Ryuko Sangi
Age: 28
Birthplace: Argus Town
Bio: Ryuko is master of Dark Aura Magic and also a childhood friend of Yunie Cohen.  The villagers respect him because he protected the village from an army of dream wraiths numerous times.  His arrogance is what holds him back from being a high councilor of Argus Town.  Ryuko protects Yunie with his heart and ends up having a love interest in her but Yunie fails to realize that.  Yunie older sister has a hidden crush on Ryuko but she doesn’t want to interfere with his love interest in her younger sister.  He also feels as though he should be the savior of Al dais and Roland.



Archie Newman
Age: 17
Birthplace: Mountain Village of Percia
Bio: Archie is a craftsman of Percia Mountain Village.  His little sister Anna is the Dream Holder and also councilor of the village.  His family weaponry is the famous Elven bow; his skills cannot be outmatched by any marksman of Al dais.  Archie is a confident young man who would someday craft the ancient weapon of his family.  His little sister looks up to her older brother even though she is a powerful young woman who runs the village.


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Interested?

If anyone is interested in jumping on board I will be more than happy to welcome anyone who has skill in mapping, scripting, and Spriting. I am hoping to add voice acting to it, so if anyone is interested in doing some voice acting for this project that would be a plus and thank you don't forget to leave some feedback ^_^


Recruitment List

 Scripters
 Mappers
 Spriters
 Artists
Voice actors

So far I am the only one working on this project alone I am an ok Mapper not to good of a spriter but story writing is my special point. \


Demo - http://www.sendspace.com/file/xv4rtd

Missing Demo Files - http://rapidshare.com/files/133691763/Missing_Files.zip.html
« Last Edit: August 04, 2008, 02:04:14 AM by Melchezdek »

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alsome can i map plz? ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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alsome can i map plz? ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

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He looks like he's pretty much got mapping covered.

Also, finally someone makes a project topic which actually gives more information than just the story.
Not only that, but the topic makes the game look like it could be pretty good.

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I think I have seen this on hbgames.org =X

I love the mapping of your Forest. *downloads*

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alsome can i map plz? ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

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He looks like he's pretty much got mapping covered.

Also, finally someone makes a project topic which actually gives more information than just the story.
Not only that, but the topic makes the game look like it could be pretty good.



I appreciate that thanks a lot, I really need Spriters, Scripters, and 1 extra mapper to make this project look and feel even more original. Don't mind the grammer and errors because it will be fixed as time goes because I am only one man doing this alone.

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Anyone interested in being part of the team?

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The Youtube code is supposed to be like this;

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Thanks a lot appreciate it.

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This project looks very good and is definitely promising. The mapping is fantastic and the cutscenes and menu look great. I think I'll keep an eye on this project.

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The mapping is amazingly great, and the menu looks perfectly fine. The storyline is very interesting and unique. I'm downloading right now.

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Thanks a lot and some new screen shots will be posted up soon.

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New pics added and new demo on the way.

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 :) Aye, this seems interesting. Currently I'm downloading the demo.  :D Can't wait to try it out!

Edit: After Ronald woke up, I head right down stairs and out the door. Then the scene in which it was rainy with the man looking for the Grayfield family came was played again. Then the screen turned black and I still hear music.  I can go to the menu, but it feels like I'm stuck. Is this a bug or am I just having bad luck?  ;9  ( it was interesting though  :D )
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Thanks a lot I will look into it new demo coming soon.

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how do you put images of the chara int the topic=?
How many times have you watched me fall just to smile, I've been through thick and thin we've struggled through now we smile, so we're here now just be ready, brace yourself cause were not leaving.

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Use the insert Image Icon when typing up your message and make sure you have your images saved to photobucket or any image upload site.

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You've got great mapping, but once the game is complete, it is going to need a beta phase for story purposes.
No offense, but when I read the character bio's All I hear in my head is "Cliche!" This isn't necessarily a bad thing, but it does need work.
Many great games ride the back of cliche all the way to the final product, but it needs to be spiced up with something original, or at the very least, something that isn't cliche yet.  (For a full comprehensive list of rpg cliches: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TheGrandListOfConsoleRolePlayingGameCliches also just a great site for story inspiration, as a "trope" is something that isn't quite a cliche yet.)
Good luck on the game though!

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You've got great mapping, but once the game is complete, it is going to need a beta phase for story purposes.
No offense, but when I read the character bio's All I hear in my head is "Cliche!" This isn't necessarily a bad thing, but it does need work.
Many great games ride the back of cliche all the way to the final product, but it needs to be spiced up with something original, or at the very least, something that isn't cliche yet.  (For a full comprehensive list of rpg cliches: http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/TheGrandListOfConsoleRolePlayingGameCliches also just a great site for story inspiration, as a "trope" is something that isn't quite a cliche yet.)
Good luck on the game though!

Thanks a lot and yes the story is being worked on completely and some things are being changed, once most of my material is done I will re-edit this entire thread.

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That artwork is amazing! Did you make them yourself?
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I am still looking for some spriters and mappers so if anyone is interested let me know ^_^

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That artwork is amazing! Did you make them yourself?

no he didn't, they're from Naramura's battler set.

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Thanks and thats not the finalized Title Screen I have some original Battlers and character sets planned out.