the hidden realms of araksosh [demo]

i had a dream a while ago and i used what little i could remember of it to make a basis for my story and after cleaning it up a bit and making it more interesting i made this

the story is not expressed very well in this demo so heres a spoiler if you want to know more

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araksosh is a realm next to our own (ooo how original) that there are various but uncommon ways of getting into however getting out is not so easy you must have something binding you to the normal world or there is no way to get back without another who has a binding object in this story our heros devin(you) steven(the not so wise know it all) and jack(the nimble yet tough technical guy who picks locks and lays explosives) they are a team of thieves and quite experienced at it but one day (as per the demo) they are trying to steal some artifacts from a pyramid that was abandoned by the archaeologists due to a sandstorm they (to put it bluntly) found a strange necklace and were sent into araksosh most of the game will be about what happens to them whilst they are there

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=ZCQDXQET

I might try the demo if you.

 1- Use periods and other punctuation.
 2- Screenshots
 3- Eat cake
 4- I sold #4 to buy #3 back from the hobo I sold it to. 

#1

and i still suck at the english language

i don't punctuate because i dont know how

#2

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this is an interesting puzzle i made if you didn't guess that

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happy?

#3 i wanted to eat some cake but the cake was a lie
#4 hey who you callin a hobo?