[Writing] Haikus not for the innocent-minded.

CartoonFan · October 16, 2007, 02:03:17 AM

Edit: I didn't get it right!

modern algebra · October 16, 2007, 02:22:51 AM

errm...

5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables

CartoonFan · October 16, 2007, 02:46:28 AM

Oops! I didn't get it right!

Leventhan · October 16, 2007, 03:21:59 AM

Haiku is hard.

JAP · October 16, 2007, 07:46:55 AM

Yeah. Difficult, unless you do it in Japanese.

Forty · October 16, 2007, 11:44:11 PM

The war is over
May we now all live in peace
We found the donut

modern algebra · October 17, 2007, 01:04:04 AM

"For the donut is found" is 6 syllables.

Leventhan · October 17, 2007, 04:09:12 AM

Ahoy, me hearties.
We fight and pillage all men.
Cause we are pirates!

JAP · October 19, 2007, 11:47:27 AM

That's a cute one~ <3

Let's see...
Urm...

Nah, it's going to be Japanese and I think it sounds cheesy. >_>

Forty · October 20, 2007, 03:21:21 AM

fix'd

JAP · October 20, 2007, 03:32:42 AM

You need to fix the second line now. It's only 6.

Forty · October 20, 2007, 03:41:53 AM

O_O

how did that happen? Oh well, fix'd

Leventhan · October 20, 2007, 07:09:14 AM

Hah, this is easier than I thought!

-Dominating Atlantis-

Here we come, mermans!
To dominate Atlantis,
and rule the waters...

Kokowam · October 20, 2007, 04:16:29 PM

My name is Moo Kwak
Which are two animal sounds.
Isn't that funny? XD

Malson · October 21, 2007, 12:15:14 AM

How are haikus hard?
Unless you're a mongoloid,
you can make one up.

Sophist · October 21, 2007, 12:54:32 AM

This reminds me of,
the Hitchhikers Guide to the
the Galaxy period.

Malson · October 21, 2007, 01:25:03 AM

what the fucking hell
EVA it's not that hard
it's five-seven-five.

Sophist · October 21, 2007, 01:26:40 AM

Oh shit, I thought
that period was some
five-syllables right?

modern algebra · October 21, 2007, 06:01:57 AM

Oh Shit, I thought 4
that period was some 6

Also, you're not supposed to just break up a sentence to make a haiku.

Haikus are complete.
Tearing a sentence in two
makes it stupid, see?

Leventhan · October 21, 2007, 06:14:38 AM

Good job there, MA.
Showing EVA his mistake.
Haiku is awesome.

Kokowam · October 21, 2007, 11:49:38 AM

Shut up, you pirate.
But didn't modern also
Make that same mistake?

XD

Or was that a joke?
I can't really tell that well.
If so, hahaha!

Malson · October 21, 2007, 11:54:20 AM

Haikus are so dumb. =/
Yeah I know they're poetry,
but they're kinda lame.

Redwyn · October 21, 2007, 12:00:47 PM

I love you so hard
Please come in to my bed T_T
Me need to be pleasured.

Ignore that nasty Haiku please.
This is so freaking simple,it hurts.
So please lets make more!

Malson · October 21, 2007, 12:16:17 PM

If it's so simple,
then why do you screw it up?
Count your syllables.

Redwyn · October 21, 2007, 12:20:39 PM

Oh yes syllables, gah I forgot about those XD