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[Writing] Blood, Blood
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#1 • Oct 5, 2007
    • Blood, Blood
    A Poem by JAP

    Blood, blood
    Cherry red gloom
    Flowing like tears
    The end is near

    Blood, blood
    Thick crimson flood
    Killing my fear
    Washing the rear

    Blood, blood
    Splattered, blotch
    Filling up near
    Dripping great

    Blood, blood
    Blood, blood
    Blood, blood
    Blood...

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    Did that in 5 minutes, my fastest record!! XD I'm just a blood freak, so I wrote that in the middle of the Physics test! x3

    Comments and critiques are really appreciated!! >O<
    « Last Edit: May 25, 2015, 10:03:17 AM by boe »
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    #2 • Oct 5, 2007
    • [Critique] I don't understand 'blotch' [/critique]
    [comment] It's like those artistic poems, which shakespear wrote and you don't get it the first time, but its good [/comment]
    [other notes] Play unreal or something if you like blood[/other notes]
    Arlen is hot.
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    #3 • Oct 5, 2007
    • XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

    I REALLY REALLY LOVE YOU NIGHTWOLF~!!
    THANK YOU VERY MUCH~! =3

    Blotch... Errr, I think it's the synonym of 'drops'. I think.
    Yes, my style is rather old. I'm influenced by Edgar Allan Poe... Too influenced? =D Just love to write those macabre poems.
    Hmm, I never played Unreal, but I had played Drakengard and can't help but to turn the blood effect on. X3 SO BLOODY~! Thanks for suggesting it, though. I gotta try it out.
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    #4 • Oct 5, 2007
    • Not bad.
    But too many the word "Blood".
    Be kind, everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle.
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    #5 • Oct 6, 2007
    • XD Thanks!!

    BLOOOD~! <3
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    #6 • Oct 6, 2007
    • [jepoardy]"I'll take poems for 500."

    "Blood, blood
    Cherry red gloom
    Flowing like tears
    The end is near

    Blood, blood
    Thick crimson flood
    Killing my fear
    Washing the rear

    Blood, blood
    Splattered, blotch
    Filling up near
    Dripping great

    Blood, blood
    Blood, blood
    Blood, blood
    Blood..."

    "Hmm... What is Blood, blood?"


    "Oooh, sorry."[/jepoardy]

    I like how it isn't all "AMERICA SUCKS POEM EVERYONE IS DYING WHILE I SIT IN MY HOUSE AND TYPE THINGS."

    <3
    you awoke in a burning paperhouse
    from the infinite fields of dreamless sleep
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    #7 • Oct 6, 2007
    • Thanks!! <3 It's really an honor!

    Well, I never understand how to write any American-styled poems after all.
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    #8 • Oct 6, 2007
    • [Sarcasm]
    American style Poem.
    [hr width=35%]
    I like beeeer.

    [/Sarcasm]
    Be kind, everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle.
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    In the end, we realize our insignificance.
    #9 • Apr 5, 2008
    • Das ist BlÜd
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    #10 • Apr 29, 2008
    • Blotch is a sort of stain, me thinks :).
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    #11 • May 13, 2008
    • Quote from: SorceressKyrsty on April 29, 2008, 11:05:46 AM
    Blotch is a sort of stain, me thinks :).

    You are right. =3
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