[Writing] Blood, Blood

[JAP]

Blood, Blood
A Poem by JAP

Blood, blood
Cherry red gloom
Flowing like tears
The end is near

Blood, blood
Thick crimson flood
Killing my fear
Washing the rear

Blood, blood
Splattered, blotch
Filling up near
Dripping great

Blood, blood
Blood, blood
Blood, blood
Blood...

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Did that in 5 minutes, my fastest record!! XD I'm just a blood freak, so I wrote that in the middle of the Physics test! x3

Comments and critiques are really appreciated!! >O<

[Nightwolf]

[Critique] I don't understand 'blotch' [/critique]
[comment] It's like those artistic poems, which shakespear wrote and you don't get it the first time, but its good [/comment]
[other notes] Play unreal or something if you like blood[/other notes]

[JAP]

XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

I REALLY REALLY LOVE YOU NIGHTWOLF~!!
THANK YOU VERY MUCH~! =3

Blotch... Errr, I think it's the synonym of 'drops'. I think.
Yes, my style is rather old. I'm influenced by Edgar Allan Poe... Too influenced? =D Just love to write those macabre poems.
Hmm, I never played Unreal, but I had played Drakengard and can't help but to turn the blood effect on. X3 SO BLOODY~! Thanks for suggesting it, though. I gotta try it out.

[Leventhan]

Not bad.
But too many the word "Blood".

[JAP]

XD Thanks!!

BLOOOD~! <3

[Sophist]

[jepoardy]"I'll take poems for 500."

"Blood, blood
Cherry red gloom
Flowing like tears
The end is near

Blood, blood
Thick crimson flood
Killing my fear
Washing the rear

Blood, blood
Splattered, blotch
Filling up near
Dripping great

Blood, blood
Blood, blood
Blood, blood
Blood..."

"Hmm... What is Blood, blood?"


"Oooh, sorry."[/jepoardy]

I like how it isn't all "AMERICA SUCKS POEM EVERYONE IS DYING WHILE I SIT IN MY HOUSE AND TYPE THINGS."

<3

[JAP]

Thanks!! <3 It's really an honor!

Well, I never understand how to write any American-styled poems after all.

[Leventhan]

[Sarcasm]
American style Poem.
[hr width=35%]
I like beeeer.

[/Sarcasm]

[MagicNinja]

Das ist BlÜd

[SorceressKyrsty]

Blotch is a sort of stain, me thinks .

[JAP]

Blotch is a sort of stain, me thinks .

You are right. =3