Hero: Rise of the Eldar...my first game!

DEMO: http://files.filefront.com/Hero2exe/;4883008;;/fileinfo.html

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Long ago a war broke out between two races...the humans and the Eldar....the Eldar is basically like human but with supernatural powers....the war went on for years until all of a sudden a strange event happened...and the war ended....20 years later an old man gets confronted with a strange crystal and it explodes and only a baby appears...the old man takes the baby as his own and raises...18 years later, the baby has grown up and lives a normal life....until he and his grandpa are robbed and the boy starts to run after him...he finally catches him but is instantly knocked out from the punch the theif threw at him...the thief throws him over a bridge and he and he fell into the waterfall and washes up on shore....he wakes up in a house unknown to him...when he finally recovers he is confronted by the family who took him in....once he leaves he is on a raging rampage and wants revenge against the thief....
    Go on teh adventure with him and learn supernatural powers and the back story of his past and what his future beholds before him

(I know that my story, sucks,,but you know I try...lol) please play and give me some criticizm comments lol...im ready...and i promise i won't cry....

i can't fingure out a way to make the pics larger...oh well

edit: alright i made the pics larger...

note: i have over like 30 maps i think lol

Intresting story... if you could get bigger pics then i could tell how good your mapping is ._.

Intresting story... if you could get bigger pics then i could tell how good your mapping is ._.

yea the story needs some work...but how can i make the pics larger

and have you played the demo yet

oooo i didnt see the demo, ill try it now

oooo i didnt see the demo, ill try it now

yea i made the pics larger...and i want and need comments on my games so i can what it's like thru the consumer lol

You need an intro.... defiently. And I don't know where to go... the monsters are impossible to defeat. But good mapping  

oops...i messed up hold on...i put the starting position in the wrong place...hold on...lol

alright i got the new demo up so please cheack it out lol

That's pretty good for a first game. My first game sucked! I didn't even finish it!

That's pretty good for a first game. My first game sucked! I didn't even finish it!

so do you like it....ya i had to teach myself how to do everything lol...i used the other makers but i never got serious with them lol....yea i got about 25 minutes of gameplay lol...and i hope you enjoyed the game....it still needs alot of work from here lol

Looks nice

I love it! And I really hate RPG maker games :-) The mapping is excellent in my opinion, it has a far different feel to it than other games, how the screen darks out and gives thoughts to it :-) Its just a lot of fun!

Its looks really good.. ill download it..

Pitty that almost everyone uses the standard chipsets :p

Pitty that almost everyone uses the standard chipsets :p

Because they are the best to use, they made the game, so they should be.

True.. True
Unless you can draw very good :p

thx all for the comments! lol....ill try to put some new pics...and maybe later i'll put up a new demo...and maybe add some more stuff to the maps already made lol....thank you so much...i feel special now lol...but i'm not letting it get to my head.

Nice job! Nice mapping, nice intro. Nearly every aspect of this demo was perfect!
Apart from the fact that when you get back to your grandpas house with that girl (I forget the name) it all goes black and stays like that. Is that the end of the demo, or just a mistake  :O_o:

yea it's just a mistake...lol...i thought i fixed that lol...crap...oh well...i guess ill make a new demo soon....lol thx for telling me man! lol

Your welcome :wink:
Was there more demo after that? Coz if there was...  :evil:

what's up with the demon...face..unsatified lol..yea there was more maps you can go to like the main city Crag Telos which is what im working on right now...lol

The story reminds me of Dragonball.

it does lol...not for me....once i get a new demo..ill update the story..and ill make sure it doesn't fit the dragon ball storyline lol...

I really lke ur game its really good, please finish it...PLEASE!!

Exelent mapping skill! Its rare I see maps that good in a game. Though for some reason the demo cut out on me, you may want to reword the intro, maybe give it a more a epic feeling.