game over screen

its pretty shit but okay, here it is:

Seems a bit plain, and wtf is with people and Sephiroth? I know he's cool and everything but I swear...the fascination of this character has run to the extreme.

The text doesn't really fit the picture. You need to do it differently.

Yeah, the text can be changed, and if it isn't a final fantasy game, don't use it please!! But I like the fire, looks cool.

Yeah, the text can be changed, and if it isn't a final fantasy game, don't use it please!! But I like the fire, looks cool.

Change the text to flaming like the background.
And an addition, theres no point to it unless sephriroth (sp?) is in the game, so.. yea.

Its two pictures faded together...wow.

To allow it to work with other games, I say remove Sepiroth, put the text in the center and blend it with the fire... that's if you can.
I like the choice of font, and the work done on the flames, gives it a "the world will fall into ruin" feel. Good job.

If,its for an FF game,its great,but if your gonna share it with other people please remove sephiroth and put the text near the center

You should put the text to the center and change the text a little bit to make it match, but other than that it looks pretty good.

How you like this one?



EDIT: Or this one?

The first is kinda a bad, the second one is a lot better

No wonder, it was a five-minute job. =P

EDIT: And here is another five-minute job:

Rather than spending "five minutes" on an game over screen you could at least put some work into it. What's wrong with that last one;

1. I can hardly see the text
1.5. The text font is horrible.
2. Wtf with that thing coming out of the M?
3. The background is way to....amateur

Aha... okay... well, then show some of yours.

Dude first of all I'm not going into a competition with anyone regarding graphics. Considering it is my profession, I would easily kick your ass.

Secondly, I am making a statement and improvements you should look into.

You should read my post from above again... Did I say ANYTHING about a competition? I just asked you to show me some of your work. When I see someone else

Dude I just told you to spend a little bit more time on it rather than five minutes.

Ok, good. And what do you think of this title screen?

You need to work on your text. I really doubt that anyone would be able to read what is written there without some difficulty.

Maybe you should zoom a bit, lol! JK!
Really, if you zoom, you will be able to read everything. At least the original one on 1024x768.
And it

They aren't to bad for five minute jobs. I don't like the purple gameover but the one with the eyes is pretty cool. BTW, Viper is right, I didn't notice the text at all until he mentioned something about it.

The "Eyes of Darkness" were no 5-minute job. I would rather say 5-hours jobs... Since that whole wallpaper (originally it really was only a wallpaper) is made in photoshop, it took quite some time to make it really good. If you take a close look, underneath the eyes are some white pixels. Actually they are left from an edit, I saved at the infamous "Oh no!" moment. I could have undone it, but it was a "closing photoshop, do you want to save blah blah blah..." I tought I should leave it after I undid the most of it afterwards, since it gives it a personal note.    And you can

Rather than spending "five minutes" on an game over screen you could at least put some work into it. What's wrong with that last one;

1. I can hardly see the text
1.5. The text font is horrible.
2. Wtf with that thing coming out of the M?
3. The background is way to....amateur

I do all my graphics on MS paint. Mine look better than that

I seriously doubt that there mental. You can get those filter effects with MS Paint.

Rather than spending "five minutes" on an game over screen you could at least put some work into it. What's wrong with that last one;

1. I can hardly see the text
1.5. The text font is horrible.
2. Wtf with that thing coming out of the M?
3. The background is way to....amateur

I do all my graphics on MS paint. Mine look better than that

Good, but try to make something like this PURE in Paint (Don