Ending Music (Feedback)

I would like some feedback on this;


Kind of the Story what I thought of:

I want to use it as an Ending Song, as the Lead Character's name is Johnny.
I thought, when the Singer says "Johnny, just go and fade away.", the Lead Character and his party members literally fade away.
Then they come on the hunting fields, back with his parents, grandparents and all his friends and related.
When he is almost there, he fades away and comes back on earth.


And please, this time also comment if you look.

I'm definitely using this feedback, that's why there are some rules:

1. No "OMFG THAT SUX!!1" stuff.
2. Give good feedback, not too short but also not too long.
3. Say if it fits the map that I described above.

EDIT: Changed the map description abit.

i need to login/signup to listen to it, so im not gonna bother.

Oh I'm sorry...
Do you know an other website where I can upload music and can make you guys listen to it too?
Like all other people have on The Auditorium?
I just can't figure out what it is...

should try askin the mod of the auditorium, they could help you out with it.

Yay, fixed!
Come on with that feedback people!

You haven't linked to an mp3 file in it =o

You have to be kidding me right?
Well... Another try.
Try now.
Do you know a good site from where to upload?

*BUMP*
Done.
Feedback, NAO!

Nope, you're doing it wrong. Firstoff, you're using the tag wrong. It isn't

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[mp3]link]link[/mp3]

Like you're doing, it's just

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[mp3]link[/mp3]

Secondly, even if you were using it right, your link isn't to an mp3 file. It's to a page. You need to host your mp3 somewhere.