my side view animated battlers (1 total for now)

Joaocarlos · June 03, 2007, 02:32:00 PM

I'm making my own battlers for a side-view system. Tell me what do you think and tell me what should I improve.
you can use it if you want just give me credit
i will post all of my work here

still making the rest of this one

Last update:
battler:

attack:

ready:

battle open:

move to:

guard:

get hit:

dead:

low hp:

]

item use:

magic skill:

victory:

(this one I just made the hair and some small edits on the body... the original it's from whiskey_addict)

Knight Rider · June 03, 2007, 05:11:41 PM

It's Cloud! Impressive, i like it.

Polraudio · June 03, 2007, 06:19:11 PM

I like it. I don't think you need to improve 1 bit.

Halestorm5 · June 03, 2007, 06:27:20 PM

THE LIGHT! IT BURNS!

Literally, you need to make the hair darker, oh wait, its not shaded!

landofshadows · June 03, 2007, 07:23:10 PM

The Hair could do with some shading... But it's really good, love the sword swipe and the way it glimmers in the light on the down strike.

biohazard · June 03, 2007, 10:29:58 PM

Lower the saturation, and the sword gets thin when he slashes down, fix that.

Joaocarlos · June 04, 2007, 01:38:30 PM

thx all

well I made some updates according to all the advices

dollmage · June 04, 2007, 01:53:42 PM

wow another white ties temp. user =) nice...

hmmmm but you should shadow your hair more, and make a color pattern which show's where the light is being directed. in the hair. like the one with you do on his shirt.

your using ccoas. side view right?

Joaocarlos · June 04, 2007, 01:56:56 PM

oh you're right.... i will take care of that

yeah i'm using ccoas side-view

dollmage · June 04, 2007, 03:32:46 PM

kinda like the way Ian's hair, but in a different angel coz cloud's hair is spikey

Joaocarlos · June 04, 2007, 04:38:02 PM

well i did my best

tell me how it is

-update frist post-

ups i did the metel sholder on the wrong arm $:-\$

Knight Rider · June 04, 2007, 06:24:59 PM

Quote from: Joaocarlos on June 04, 2007, 04:38:02 PM
ups i did the metel sholder on the wrong arm $:-\$

yep, fix it and maybe some shade at the hair.

dollmage · June 05, 2007, 03:07:30 PM

ahhhh lot more better =) great job keep it up.

Joaocarlos · June 05, 2007, 08:06:54 PM

well this is last version i made -update first post-

Halestorm5 · June 05, 2007, 08:15:41 PM

Muchly better! Are you gonna finish it?

Joaocarlos · June 05, 2007, 08:44:15 PM

yeah i will

i'm going to do all of the base poses and make some poses for the limit beaks, summons, magic, etc

and also all of the other caractects

i have some free time now so i will post some soon

tSwitch · June 05, 2007, 09:10:26 PM

coming along quite nicely,
I like it a lot.
are you making an FF7 fan game?

Joaocarlos · June 05, 2007, 09:59:10 PM

maybe i will... but i'm not sure

Joaocarlos · June 06, 2007, 02:32:58 PM

1º post
update- new sword
- new ready pose
- and some other small updates

Halestorm5 · June 06, 2007, 03:57:53 PM

The edit of the clothes shading and the difficult shaded hair makes him seem professinal.

But theres one problem I just cant get my eye on...

Joaocarlos · June 06, 2007, 05:21:55 PM

yeah I think that to... $:-\$

well if anyone knows what's missing pls tell

edit: just updated... hope you like

dollmage · June 07, 2007, 10:53:54 AM

wow been gone for one day and that what happens very nicely done =)

Polraudio · June 07, 2007, 12:18:07 PM

Nice Keep up the good work

tSwitch · June 07, 2007, 12:34:30 PM

you need to add more movement to the battle stance and low hp poses

what I mean is, more than just the arms need to move in the ready stance, his legs should also be bobbing up and down to make it seem realistic.

and for the low hp pose, his head should move slightly but it should be slightly delayed, so that it starts moving up after the arms, and the same for down

otherwise it's looking really good.

Joaocarlos · June 07, 2007, 01:42:46 PM

hmm ok i see your point $:-\$ ok i will fix that

oh heres the magic skill