Alastiers Legacy : Rise to Honour

Heres some info on my game and characters.

the main story is Alastiers story which is here.

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When he is drafted into the army a monk beats him up at the fort because hes such a wuss in an attempt to make him more manly.You meet this arsehole soldier who says your father(died in war, was a knight)was a shitty soldier and that your no better, so you set out to prove that he's wrong. While reading in the library to see if he can find more about his father, Alastier to confronted by an old sergeant. He tells him that he actually fought along side with his father and explains that your father was a great man. so you set out to prove that and prove that your a great soldier as well.

Main Character

Spoiler for:

Name : Alastier
Role : Main Charater
Age : 17
Class : Squire - Knight
Ele. : Earth
Sex : Male
Traits : Weak Spirit
           Earthly Magic Ability
           Doesnt like being hero

Second Character

Spoiler for:

Name : Caryn
Role : Alastiers companion
Age : 16
Class : Monk - Priestess
Ele. : Wind
Sex : Female
Traits : Short Temper
           Doesnt get along with Alastier
           Healing Power

         
Third Character

Spoiler for:

Name : Brodie
Role : Alastiers and Caryn's Companion later on
Age : 32
Class : Guard - Warrior
Ele. : Fire
Sex : Male
Traits : Level Headed
           Belives Alastiers father left his to die(more exaplaination in game)
           Keeps Alastier and Caryn from fighting all the time.

Sounds good XD. But make sure you post pics about it.

There are requirements to these kinds of threads. Other than that, good luck

Thanks so much for givin' me credit for the storyline. But yeah, this game is gunna be good.

oh yeah, credits go to riku994 for story ideas Choas what do yo mean by screen shots? just of maps, cuz i only started on the maps

Yes, screenshots of maps are required but thats fine for a bit since you are working on them. No worries for now

Yeah, that's why you should make the game a bit before you post it.

i can give ya a screen of the farm Alastier is raised on.
and im gonna start on the plains to the fort right now

alright, geez...

That's a pretty good map. Lookin' forward to more screens and a demo when it's available.

here are screens of all the places

Its not me who is forcing you, Im just saying some sort of pic is needed. And when you do post it just edit your first post.

alright, what do you think of Knighthood for a name?

Typo errors in your first post. XD Anyways, that sounds like a good name and I might think some up, too. How about... "Inheritance of Knight-Errantry"? XP

1. i dont really care for typo errors unless theyre really bad and
2. what the FLIP does the name mean!

well, it's about him upholding family honor, right? "The Legacy of Alastier" seems to fit.

2. what the FLIP does the name mean!

This place will tell you: http://www.dictionary.com Also, I was planning on using Legacy but that was kinda cliched (NOT AS CLICHED AS "INHERITANCE" >:]) so I used my word.

I like Legacy of Alastier.

ok so far names ive made up/gotten are :
knighthood,
judgement,
inheritence blah blah dont wanna type it all,
the legacy of alastier

i though of just now :
family honour,
alastiers honour,
alastiers legacy


tell me what yuo think and ill take the majority

yeah legacy is overused but the thing is though that the word "legacy" actually fits the game, unlike the rest of the noob faggots.

thats true, so ill go with alastiers legacy for now. ill make a title screen and post it.

since the game is based sorta in scotland, i used names from scotland, i found this pic of a lake and i think this title screen is pretty sweet


EDIT : THIS TITLE SCREEN WORKS, I GOT RID OF OLD ONE

Just in case, I brainstormed some amazing names

A Knight's Tale
Blades of Glory
The Last King of Scotland

Blades of Glory is a movie about two guys skating! For gods sakes!

thats true, it was really funny by the way, also alastier isnt the last king of scotland, he just some commoner, like William Wallace the coolest scottish guy ever. so last king of scotland is out. and knights tale doesnt really work cuz your not a knight.

I likes your maps. They're just too empty and you didnt use common-sence. What I mean is, why is a sprite which is designed for a prisoner is working in a rich looking shop.