[Visual] Sprite Models (so far two)

I made these two models, and I haven't completed all of their actions and movements, but I was wondering if someone wanted to help. If not, I'll still make them regardless.
The complete set will have a running sprite, a walking sprite, and sliding sprite, an attacking sprite, a getting hit sprite (2 different), a jumping sprite, a falling sprite, a dead sprite, magic charging sprite, special ability sprite.
I'm also going to revamp then sometime soon.

Human Knight:


Alien or swamp beast:



Please give some creative criticism. 

They're incredibly simple. Add some shading onto those suckers.

Look real close, its actually there. The problem is that the shades are too similar. Differentiate between each shade more.

maybe you could make the head of the soldier stand up instead of fallin down

Well, it is standing up, it's the hair that makes it look like it's falling.
But I'll make it look more upwards! 

And I'm gonna make a knight with a full set of armor.

  NEW SMILEY! 

Look real close, its actually there. The problem is that the shades are too similar. Differentiate between each shade more.

Will do!

They're better than I think I can do.  I'll try to make some and post them to see what you think. 

 

Imma pimp those out, and I'll help if I feel like it.

Thanks, I revamped the knight, and I'm going to post it, and I would, but it's on my other computer....I think I might have uploaded it. There are more colors in it.
The original I think there are only 20 colors.

Well, I have Bio (maybe) helping!

hehe i will create a Naruto Sexi no Jutsu sprite

lol, I love it! 

hehe i will create a Naruto Sexi no Jutsu sprite

...Did you actually make that from scratch?

hehe i will create a Naruto Sexi no Jutsu sprite

...Did you actually make that from scratch?

I doubt he did....
But it's very possible... Nice job if you did! 

'S why I asked.

No, he didn't.  I have seen that before on many naruto spritesheets.  If he did, I appologize, but I'm pretty sure he didn't, so fuck him.

hehe lol i create from Naruto Ninja Council 2 (this is game for GBA). Use a Print Screen
I wass create more sprite of Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura and more naruto characters
When you want any characters or etc. msg me or msg here " LOOOOOOL "
A will create naruto sprite for my next game Naruto Council 0,4%

Please don't take this the wrong way, I just want to clarify something so that it will be easier to see what you are trying to say. Do you speak English as a first language? We have a number of members here that do not, I'm not trying to single you out or anything.

Or do you at least speak Engrish?

lol sorry for my stupid english but i am not in english :p

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Yeah, see, ripping pre made sprites from a game is not making them.  They have a copyright, and it is illegal to use them for a commercial poduct.  Don't say you made a sprite, when you just took it from a game.

Here are my very first sprites!!!  Is pretty princess. 



 

Hmmm...you need more shading. (Like I should talk! lol)

I know...  I'm not very good at shading.  There is like a tiny bit but not enough to see at this size...  and not enough to make much of a difference anyway.  lol 

 

Good for a first try, though the princess' clothes get mixed in with the white background.

yeah, very hard to see, that's why I always make mine like black or something. (The background)

Always (try) to make the background a complimentary colour of your peice, if you made something white, have a black background, if you have a green character, have an orange background.