[Visual] Sprite Models (so far two)

[SirJackRex]

I made these two models, and I haven't completed all of their actions and movements, but I was wondering if someone wanted to help. If not, I'll still make them regardless.
The complete set will have a running sprite, a walking sprite, and sliding sprite, an attacking sprite, a getting hit sprite (2 different), a jumping sprite, a falling sprite, a dead sprite, magic charging sprite, special ability sprite.
I'm also going to revamp then sometime soon.

Human Knight:


Alien or swamp beast:



Please give some creative criticism. 

[Malson]

They're incredibly simple. Add some shading onto those suckers.

[Arrow]

Look real close, its actually there. The problem is that the shades are too similar. Differentiate between each shade more.

[Snailer]

maybe you could make the head of the soldier stand up instead of fallin down

[SirJackRex]

Well, it is standing up, it's the hair that makes it look like it's falling.
But I'll make it look more upwards! 

And I'm gonna make a knight with a full set of armor.

NEW SMILEY! 

Look real close, its actually there. The problem is that the shades are too similar. Differentiate between each shade more.

Will do!

[Jexan]

They're better than I think I can do.  I'll try to make some and post them to see what you think. 

[biohazard]

Imma pimp those out, and I'll help if I feel like it.

[SirJackRex]

Thanks, I revamped the knight, and I'm going to post it, and I would, but it's on my other computer....I think I might have uploaded it. There are more colors in it.
The original I think there are only 20 colors.

Well, I have Bio (maybe) helping!

[Leon Oswald]

hehe i will create a Naruto Sexi no Jutsu sprite

[SirJackRex]

lol, I love it! 

[Arrow]

hehe i will create a Naruto Sexi no Jutsu sprite

...Did you actually make that from scratch?

[SirJackRex]

hehe i will create a Naruto Sexi no Jutsu sprite

...Did you actually make that from scratch?

I doubt he did....
But it's very possible... Nice job if you did! 

[Arrow]

'S why I asked.

[biohazard]

No, he didn't.  I have seen that before on many naruto spritesheets.  If he did, I appologize, but I'm pretty sure he didn't, so fuck him.

[Leon Oswald]

hehe lol i create from Naruto Ninja Council 2 (this is game for GBA). Use a Print Screen
I wass create more sprite of Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura and more naruto characters
When you want any characters or etc. msg me or msg here " LOOOOOOL "
A will create naruto sprite for my next game Naruto Council 0,4%

[Arrow]

Please don't take this the wrong way, I just want to clarify something so that it will be easier to see what you are trying to say. Do you speak English as a first language? We have a number of members here that do not, I'm not trying to single you out or anything.

[SirJackRex]

Or do you at least speak Engrish?

[Leon Oswald]

lol sorry for my stupid english but i am not in english :p

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[biohazard]

Yeah, see, ripping pre made sprites from a game is not making them.  They have a copyright, and it is illegal to use them for a commercial poduct.  Don't say you made a sprite, when you just took it from a game.

[Jexan]

Here are my very first sprites!!!  Is pretty princess. 

[SirJackRex]

Hmmm...you need more shading. (Like I should talk! lol)

[Jexan]

I know...  I'm not very good at shading.  There is like a tiny bit but not enough to see at this size...  and not enough to make much of a difference anyway.  lol 

[Nightwolf]

Good for a first try, though the princess' clothes get mixed in with the white background.

[SirJackRex]

yeah, very hard to see, that's why I always make mine like black or something. (The background)

[biohazard]

Always (try) to make the background a complimentary colour of your peice, if you made something white, have a black background, if you have a green character, have an orange background.