[Writing] A story

[Yukimora]

ok i came up with a backround story with my bro but i think its to short but i want to know what u think

It was year 3201, The world is devestated after World War five and the planet can not take anymore abuse. With the planet failing, and the three strongest world powers reduced to companys, they finaly come to peace. It is now year 3209 and the companies stand neak in neak fighting for the most power. There has been rumors of a resistance group trying to stop another world war from breaking out and destroying the world.

[JAP]

Pretty nice, but also cliche. Or is it just me?

The background story is enough. From that short thing you can grew up to other conflicts, so I guess for now it's ok. But like I said just now, it's pretty cliche. I mean, there's already tons kind of story which... similar?

Sorry if there's something wrong in my opinion.

[Yukimora]

no your intitled to your opinion and its ok i know it must be cliche i did take ideas from other games/anime and kinda just put them togather into a big conflict.

[modern algebra]

Sounds pretty cool to me.