I've also just noticed that Ventus requires a comma after "well," so that it reads: "Well, who hasn't?" Sion, these aren't the first screens you've shown with punctuation errors. What you are in need of is an editor. Please understand that I mean that in the nicest way possible. If you want people to respect your game, you can't have the dialogue look as if it was written at an elementary level. Since it's been DragonMagna and I that have been pointing out the typos, why don't you hire us as editors? Just send either of us a .ZIP of what you have so far, and we'll give it all a look-see, then send you a revised version for you to distribute to the eager masses. I like to think that you can trust us not to change the dialogue any more than necessary, because I realize that there is a personal aspect in the dialogue, but I just can't stand to see commas missing from everything. Please think about it.