[Music] There may be no tommorrow ;-;

 Ahah, the title is actually the name of my new song, i sposes i've made some improvement.
K.
So yeah, this is based on a movie's main song, it has only 1 piano, but i changed it and made to, and as you know Hindi movies have 2 paragraphed songs(in which both are same) so yeah, its kinda the same.
But meh ftw.
I even added a flute at the end so you guys know the "main tune"


ALSO, i have the midi, tabit and mp3 versions.
So for you people who like to waste space on the comp by dling mp3s-go on.
yes, the mp3 version, SUX, because its like changing the thing.

so

kthxbai.

cool, good workies

Err yeah thanks.

Guys, dont say its good if its bad(whch i know you heartless bastards wont lol) just cuz im 12. I CAN BARE IT.

It's a little sad  :'(
But still good work i couldnt make it XD

thanks. Well, Morris, before judging, be sure to download it, k?
^^;

You have made an interesting flavor here, I was ready for some sappy instruments like strings and or flutes, but that wasn't provided! I like the simplicity, however as much as my teacher had always said to get away with as much repeating as possible, don't over do it. On some spots it seemed a little rough, seemed out of place for instance the trilling notes on certain times (00.30-32s and so on).

And in my opinion: as I listened to both the mp3 and midi; I liked the midi better because it seemed to have retained better quality actually.

Overall I rather like it. There can be some progress made and I'm sure you'll be able to do it as you learn.

You need to try using some chords.


Not bad, though. Definite improvement.

Yes, I can TOTALLY agree there. Look out for some of the dischord your getting on that paino though.

Err, simpler words?

I think what he's saying is sometimes a little clash is good in a chord, but don't go overboard.

It's good, I would recommend you work on your beat a little, I like the style you're going for but it could use a little more definition.