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i am comeing up with a story for my game and i just want to see what u all think so far




                  Kain's Curse


 The history:In the begining there where dragons,for it was them that made the earth, and
 for a time it was good.Then one dragon though that he should rule above all outhers.So he
 waged war on all outher dragons, but this dragon was to be takein lightly,for he was very
 powerfull in the art of black magic,moreso then all outhers.The war waged on for years
 and years untill finaly the evil dragon was defeated.The order of dragond had to deside
 what to do with him. After a year of thinking they have finly desided,if he wanted to be
 king so bad then he would,but in his own world. For the order made the earth as a prison
 for him.To make sure he would never escape,they selade it with seven cyrstles one for each
 elmant fire,earth,water,sky,sprit,light and darknes.the only way to brake the spell was to
 bring to geather the seven cyrstles,And no dragon could tuch them.For when the evil  dragon  was on the earth he saw some thing that he had never seen before.Man was its name,
 and the order had made man to give the evil dragon someone to rule over.When the evil     dragon saw this he started to cast spells of dark and evil magic.For his plan was to make    something half dragon and half man. For this best well have the form of a man, but can fly,
 cast magic,and a rare few could breath fire.The evil dragon named these things "dragoons".
 For his plan was to wage war aginst the order once more , but this time with a army of
 dragoons.For sence that dragoons were half man they could do things that the evil dragon
 could never tuch like the cyrstles.So he could go back and destory the order that sent him   to this "prison".Before he could do this the order found out about his plan,and sent
 fighting dragons to fight his army.The battle was long and hard and manny dragons and
 dragoons were lost,but in the end the dragons won,but only because a young dragoon
 help them.After the war, the rest of the dragoons were all destored and with them
 the evil dragon.All expted the good dragoon named kain,for he ruled for manny years as
 king.When he died a profeat said"The world will fall into rune,and the evil one will come
 back,when this happens kain will return anhd save the world once more."



 srry for any miss spellings

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Dragons are cool and all that, but to be completely honest, unless you are really good at making the tired concept of "Good Vs. Evil in a Huge War with one Uber Bad Guy who gets imprisoned in a Multielemental Crystal" more original than what is sounds like so far, people will lose interest pretty quickly.

As for mispellings... goodness...

Anyway, good luck with your story.  Maybe get someone well-versed in story and character development to help you out.