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Both are the concepts for the main heroine in my game. I can't still decided which one to use. ;__________;
Which one do you like the best? Left or right?
Then, as always, Jappy likes critiques and comments.
They look pretty much the same except their clothes, i like both of them.
But i got an idea, choose i number between one and ten.
Hun? I choose 3.
Then choose the left one.
See, left=odd
right=eve
3=odd.
I can't see them. ;9
Me neither :(
Maybe Ripway's server was busy when you're here.
Because me and Nightwolf can see them just fine.
:o
I prefer the left one. :)
Quote from: Lominisio on October 13, 2007, 12:45:14 AM
:o
I prefer the left one. :)
What is the first smiley means? =O
Thanks for choosing! ^_^
the left one is better, but as for criticism, the cheekbone is a little -too- exaggerated
I know where you were going with it, but it's a bit too much.
also, her fingernails on her right arm look scary :X
nice work tho
very nice work
Quote from: jap0911 on October 13, 2007, 01:04:14 AM
What is the first smiley means? =O
Basically it means I like your art. You should give her a slight smile though. :)
I like the one on the left. ^_^
~o~ I wish I could draw.
I prefer the lft one.
Awesome job! ;D
Look carefully and you can see the site's text.
Most prefer the left one hun... Hmmm, I see I see...
Quote from: NAMKCOR on October 13, 2007, 01:04:46 AM
the left one is better, but as for criticism, the cheekbone is a little -too- exaggerated
I know where you were going with it, but it's a bit too much.
also, her fingernails on her right arm look scary :X
nice work tho
very nice work
Thanks! I'm having problems with bones. XD
Quote from: Lominisio on October 13, 2007, 01:15:58 AM
You should give her a slight smile though. :)
Well, that might ruin her image. Hahaha.
Quote from: Fred on October 13, 2007, 02:12:30 AM
I like the one on the left. ^_^
~o~ I wish I could draw.
Hey but you can do eventing while I can't. LOL.
Quote from: Leventhan on October 13, 2007, 02:57:19 AM
I prefer the lft one.
Awesome job! ;D
Thank you!
Quote from: Nightwolf on October 13, 2007, 04:12:45 AM
Look carefully and you can see the site's text.
XD It's a watermark but I think it's too translucent, eh?
I like them both...
The second is more expressive though. It seems almost like the one on the left is in vacation clothing :P
The proportions in these are alot better ^^
Quote from: Lord Dante on October 13, 2007, 11:27:48 PM
I like them both...
The second is more expressive though. It seems almost like the one on the left is in vacation clothing :P
The proportions in these are alot better ^^
My, Lord Dante-sama!
LOL, I tried drawing flower patterns manually. =)
In the other hand, I tried experimenting on the proportions~ Glad it was noticed! <3
Dante is right too, the right one looks more modern.
And Jappy-ish.
Oh, another thing.
You see how on the left one's pant legs, they curve up? as if you're looking up at them?
Well, you drew two conflicting angles. At her upper chest, you're looking down on it. Because this part is under the implied horizon, anything under it also needs to be looked down on. Basically, you need to make the pant legs curve downwards, as well as tweak the view of the shoes.
On the left, with the ribbon on the left leg, just make it a bit more rounded, as it looks really flat right now.
These errors are a bit trivial here, but angles and roundness really make a difference.
I could do something about the ribbon.
But angles... I'm just so bad at perspective drawing...
They look great. I love both of them. Well done ^^b
Quote from: Zhuge Liang on October 16, 2007, 07:55:00 PM
They look great. I love both of them. Well done ^^b
Thank you! ^_^
Quote from: jap0911 on October 16, 2007, 07:49:53 AM
I could do something about the ribbon.
But angles... I'm just so bad at perspective drawing...
you should go out and grab a mannequin
I have one, and trust me, they help loads
they're quite good, but they could be better
Quote from: NAMKCOR on October 19, 2007, 03:27:19 PM
Quote from: jap0911 on October 16, 2007, 07:49:53 AM
I could do something about the ribbon.
But angles... I'm just so bad at perspective drawing...
you should go out and grab a mannequin
I have one, and trust me, they help loads
I had one but my friend broke it :(
I also found that they are too stiff for some positions.
Mannequin...?
Well, if my parents allowed to have one...
yeah, it's pretty bad for some positions, but it's possible to manipulate it part by part seperately and piece together stuff
I use it cuz I hve perspective issues sometimes
Quote from: jap0911 on October 20, 2007, 02:17:54 AM
Mannequin...?
Well, if my parents allowed to have one...
They aren't like the store mannequins with slight naughty bits, they're more like a very abstract human form. I'm sure if you tell them its for personal betterment they'll let you have one.
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one of these
That's a kinky pose Namkcor.
Quote from: Lord Dante on October 21, 2007, 07:15:29 PM
Quote from: jap0911 on October 20, 2007, 02:17:54 AM
Mannequin...?
Well, if my parents allowed to have one...
They aren't like the store mannequins with slight naughty bits, they're more like a very abstract human form. I'm sure if you tell them its for personal betterment they'll let you have one.
I know. The thing is, my dad doesn't really support my hobbies, so I guess it would be difficult to buy one without him knowing of it...
Personally I'd work with the concept on the left. It just seems to have more character.
And mannequins are indeed great tools, but another great thing to do is just pose in front of a large mirror. Or just look at pictures of people standing. Just get a feel of how weight is distributed throughout the body.
Thanks for the tip! ^_^
wtf's a manequin?
Quote from: NAMKCOR on October 21, 2007, 07:19:58 PM
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one of these
Try to make them emotionally, if not they look like 'cold-blooded' doll :=:
Besides, the right side girl left arm looks shorter than her right arm...