[Visual] Some quick sketches

[JAP]

Both are the concepts for the main heroine in my game. I can't still decided which one to use. ;__________;
Which one do you like the best? Left or right?
Then, as always, Jappy likes critiques and comments.

[Nightwolf]

They look pretty much the same except their clothes, i like both of them.

But i got an idea, choose i number between one and ten.

[JAP]

Hun? I choose 3.

[Nightwolf]

Then choose the left one.


See, left=odd
right=eve

3=odd.

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I can't see them. 

[Leventhan]

Me neither

[JAP]

Maybe Ripway's server was busy when you're here.
Because me and Nightwolf can see them just fine.

[Lominisio]

 

I prefer the left one.

[JAP]

I prefer the left one.

What is the first smiley means? =O

Thanks for choosing!

[tSwitch]

the left one is better, but as for criticism, the cheekbone is a little -too- exaggerated
I know where you were going with it, but it's a bit too much.
also, her fingernails on her right arm look scary :X

nice work tho
very nice work

[Lominisio]

What is the first smiley means? =O

Basically it means I like your art. You should give her a slight smile though.

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I like the one on the left.

^~o^~    I wish I could draw.

[Leventhan]

I prefer the lft one.
Awesome job! 

[Nightwolf]

Look carefully and you can see the site's text.

[JAP]

Most prefer the left one hun... Hmmm, I see I see...

the left one is better, but as for criticism, the cheekbone is a little -too- exaggerated
I know where you were going with it, but it's a bit too much.
also, her fingernails on her right arm look scary :X

nice work tho
very nice work

Thanks! I'm having problems with bones. XD

You should give her a slight smile though.

Well, that might ruin her image. Hahaha.

I like the one on the left.

^~o^~    I wish I could draw.

Hey but you can do eventing while I can't. LOL.

I prefer the lft one.
Awesome job! 

Thank you!

Look carefully and you can see the site's text.

XD It's a watermark but I think it's too translucent, eh?

[Lord Dante]

I like them both...
The second is more expressive though. It seems almost like the one on the left is in vacation clothing

The proportions in these are alot better ^^

[JAP]

I like them both...
The second is more expressive though. It seems almost like the one on the left is in vacation clothing

The proportions in these are alot better ^^

My, Lord Dante-sama!
LOL, I tried drawing flower patterns manually. =)
In the other hand, I tried experimenting on the proportions~ Glad it was noticed! <3

[Nightwolf]

Dante is right too, the right one looks more modern.


And Jappy-ish.

[Lord Dante]

Oh, another thing.
You see how on the left one's pant legs, they curve up? as if you're looking up at them?

Well, you drew two conflicting angles. At her upper chest, you're looking down on it. Because this part is under the implied horizon, anything under it also needs to be looked down on. Basically, you need to make the pant legs curve downwards, as well as tweak the view of the shoes.

On the left, with the ribbon on the left leg, just make it a bit more rounded, as it looks really flat right now.

These errors are a bit trivial here, but angles and roundness really make a difference.

[JAP]

I could do something about the ribbon.

But angles... I'm just so bad at perspective drawing...

[The Shadow]

They look great. I love both of them. Well done ^^b

[JAP]

They look great. I love both of them. Well done ^^b

Thank you!

[tSwitch]

I could do something about the ribbon.

But angles... I'm just so bad at perspective drawing...

you should go out and grab a mannequin
I have one, and trust me, they help loads

[InfernoPhoenix]

they're quite good, but they could be better

[Lord Dante]

I could do something about the ribbon.

But angles... I'm just so bad at perspective drawing...

you should go out and grab a mannequin
I have one, and trust me, they help loads

I had one but my friend broke it
I also found that they are too stiff for some positions.