[Visual] Art By Me! Ver.2 =D

Nicely done!

Man you;re awsome, but noone's perfect(you may break zat too)

so the drawing kewl, but now i think you should concentrate on the thing youre weakest on.

As i know you rock all roundedly.

He looks like a Male version of the statue of liberty...

His Neck is very long, his left arm looks disjointed from his body, at the top, his right hand is a little too Fat... His hair behind the band should curve to the left of him not the right from the angle of his head...

I am just a picky bugger... Ignore me if you like, but I think your picture needs some work... But this can all be changed once its coloured and gone over with a fine liner, I often do sketches like yours then correct small pencil drawn errors at the end, like in pencil stage I draw the hands with the fingures conjoined and change them in the final stage when I know the look of the face etc...

The actual style of him looks good, I like the armour and attention to detail... He looks like a Knight and no normal knight at that... he looks special like a Royal or some thing, Don't get me wrong I see a lot of pertential in your work...

The Hardest part is to get the Air around a drawing right rather than the image... And your Air (Style of dress etc) Is fantastic... Get your self an action figure like a Gi-Joe (the ones with all the joints) Position it and use it as reference for your drawings, it helps... Its just the Basic Skeleton that needs work...

Thank you, Landofshadows for sharing your view on it. I find it odd that it looks like a mle version of the statue of liberty (lol)...but that's possibly because of the spikes on his head or something. I thank you for your compliments. He is supposed to be an Emperor/commaner of sorts. I havn't decided yet.



But as for now...here is another one. This is sort of based off of the main character from Dragon Quest V (the beginning of the game). His feet are a tad big...I figured that out afterward.Also...his eyes are a bit slanted and non-proportional. However, that's all I can do about it now. http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/44800741/

That is very good! I like his design, except for one thing...

Where are his hips? His height and proportions make it seem as though if his legs are growing directly from the bottom of his stomach.

Other than that, great. The expression fits very well.

His hips are supposed to be where that rope thingy is around his waist. Dosn't look lik eit, I know. I should have made it more visible.

Right, I can see where they SHOULD go, but realistically he should be a head taller, I think.

I love it. The feet positions look sorta painful though, and his mouth bugs me. However, the latter is personal preferance.

Lol, thanks. His feet ARE odd (as I stated above) but I still think it's decent.

Your 2nd one is better... Children are always easier to draw... Your pretty good... Keep it up...

Once again, you've blown me away...

Say, do you use guidelines? How do you clean up your drawings? (I find it hard to clean up >_>)

~Winged

I don't really us eguidelines. I only use them while practicing or making rough copies. I also use them to help make different poses and such, just not on the finihsed version.

I don't really have to do alot of cleaning up...because what is before you is the way it came out. There was no mess to clean up, really.

I usually have to clean up some pencil marks, maybe cause I don't go rough versions 

~Winged

Hello, hello. Here I am back in buisness and doodling/drawing/sketching yet again.

Now, as an opener I present to you "Colored Doodle" thee Colored Doodle.




I maybe should not have colored that...but oh well! I have 2 and a half sketchbooks to fill up yet =)(Huzzah christmas!!)

Ausace?

Huh? Does that word have a meaning because it has confused me.

Lol, looks cool, yet his right arm is definatley in a bad position. At the angle/spacing it is at, his shoulders should be turned. Also, although it is only a lump in the sleeve, it looks like you drew his elbow very high up. Besides that though, its good (not as good as your not-doodles), so keep imrpoving!

And here is yet another one. Don't mind the small box in the corner...I didn't know what I was at then. It looked nicer on paper..scanned it looks bleh. I need to learn to add shape =\

Its good. Legs need to be longer, it seems, and something about the head bugs me, but otherwise keep it up.

The face bugs me to, besides that I love the sword!

~Winged

Yeah, it IS kind of odd. I dislike the sword =\

The sword isnt bad, but it is nothing special.

Ha, ha. Yeah =)

here is the rough phase of a little something I'm working on. DOn't mind the pic being cut off...the book it's in is larrgeee. Can't get to fit it fully into the scanner.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/46333237/

nice, although he looks a bit stoned and i think his head should be a bit taller.

Lol. Yeah, he does look a bit out of it.

Still, I need to find me a good way to scan in pictures in better quality.