[Writing] re-Topic- Submit Your Poems Here

Well, I know this topic exists but, it's Kinda OUT-O-DATE.
So i restarted it, So submit em.
My Poem-
                           
                                     THE RAIN


On a very heavy raining day,
no one was happy or gay,
the clouds were darkened and there was no light,
To go out-house, no one had the right.

Everyone was sad,
With the clouds going mad,
Small children were going in-house like mad,
They were tensioning their dad.

A brave boy had come to say,
Rain raIN GO AWAY,
COME BACK SOME OTHER DAY.
I, Little Johnny want to play.
Come again some other day.

The rain said in reply-
ARE YOU MAD!
WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINK I AM?
GET LOST!
AND DON'T COMMAND ME!

Johnny went crying in,
but when he came to throw garbage in the dustbin,
He say the rain SaYIN'
I AM CUASING A mayhem.

So the rain went and everyone was happy,
I know the poem was kinda crappy,
BUT WHO CARES? a wise man said.
His name was Nightwolf, NOW GO TO BED![/b]

That's a good poem. But, you should put it in the already-existing topic, out-of-date or not.

http://www.crankeye.com/forums/viewtopic.php?t=1565&start=45

...I'll post this here, it's unamed; by me of course; and when I refer to THE fire, I'm talking 'bought Hell.

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Ode to a joy once known; my grief has
consumed me;
Ode to a joy once known; I fear nothing
can heal me,

Once a flower, my joy did bloom;
Shining light upon the gloom;
But 'ere;
the flower did wilt,

Sometimes you may see,
a glimmer of hope; arise from me;
But as convincing as that may be,
That's all you'll see from me,

Ode to wonder what cause;
my joyto wilt;
Under the reigning sun;
and rushing river run,

Don't look to hard,
the anser is near;
Before my joy, could grow any higher;
My love was thrown, into THE fire.

Dinosaurs-

dinosaurs lived long ago,
their names were billy, their names were joe.
the shaked the ground whe the walked to and fro.
YO DINOSAURS WAY TA GO!

Some like Trex worke a ring.
Siting that they were the kings.
Some like Diplodocus had long necks.
If he stepped on it, broken would be the ships deck.
WHAT THE HECK!

some were big, some were small.
Some were short while others tall.
They didn't have no shopping no mall.
THEY RULED THE HALL!

I end the poem there and thus.
Cuz i'm getting late for  my bus.
Dinosaurs dinosaurs i wonder.
When you walk my thunder.
** CLAPPING, CHEERING AND ALL THAT**

By Nightwolf, the modern William Shakespere.

Pah Poems...LOL

Poems are gay
Poems are queer
I don't want no poems going in my Ear...
To many you end up taking it in the rear...

LOL... thats my attempted... I aint got a fem side to me Soz Guys !!!

Each to their own like... Suppose its creative writing n shite...!!!  

(Oh aint got nothing against gay people... I have a lodger and he bats for both sides...)

Like the wings of birds are our lives
too quickly flown away
too easily overlooked
untill on the ground they lay

ROFL! Landofshadow, lol your screwed if a gay person reads this! People at my school sing that too lol. I dont mean this to be offensive but this is what some people make up LOL!
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He's Gay
He's Queer
He takes it up the rear!
*Then repeat the name of a gay person a few times here*

He's gay
He's bent
His ass is up for rent!
*Then repeat the name of a gay person a few times here*

Sorry for being so rude, its just that I couldn't resist!      

Mr pIe... I have never heared that poem before I hope I don't get done for breach of copy-right by one of your old class mates...LOL

If you want some thing real funny check this out:- (I will use my name)

www.steven.giles.isgay.com

(Just replacve the name and Email it to your Bum tapping buddies...They hate it !!! LOL)

I have nothing against Gay people... they are the Nicest people ever.... Oh apart from Umpa Lumpa's they are much nicer !!!

Oh gyromon - I kinda liked your poem short n nice...

I like Spike Milligan Poems...
http://www.poemhunter.com/spike-milligan/poems/poet-6660/page-1/
(Poems like his are cool)

Jumbo Jet
   
 
  I saw a little elephant standing in my garden,
I said 'You don't belong in here', he said 'I beg you pardon?',
I said 'This place is England, what are you doing here?',
He said 'Ah, then I must be lost' and then 'Oh dear, oh dear'.

'I should be back in Africa, on Saranghetti's Plain',
'Pray, where is the nearest station where I can catch a train?'.
He caught the bus to Finchley and then to Mincing lane,
And over the Embankment, where he got lost, again.

The police they put him in a cell, but it was far too small,
So they tied him to a lampost and he slept against the wall.
But as the policemen lay sleeping by the twinkling light of dawn,
The lampost and the wall were there, but the elephant was gone!

So if you see an elephant, in a Jumbo Jet,
You can be sure that Africa's the place he's trying to get!

I wrote these two YEARS ago, but here they are:

The Aethyr of Johnny Cash

I am silicon chrome.
I am paper bliss.
Sent from Kubla Khan's dome,
Something you can't miss.

I am the sacred river.
I am the Xanadu peak.
Suffering poison liver,
A living cigarette freak.

I am second star forever.
I am torn, wrent flesh.
Not of the land of Never,
Constructed of wire mesh.

I am laudunum laundry,
I am absinthe quake.
Crashed the Microsoft foundry,
Lost within my own sake.

I am subterrainean security.
I am transcendant ash.
Caught within obscurity,
in the Aethyr of Johnny Cash.

I am liberal salvation.
I am democrat anarchy.
Trapped within a lost nation,
In the room without a key.

I am the psychadelic poster.
I am the lunatic calm.
To take you on a rollercoaster,
Injected on cd-rom.

I am beef-style marijuana.
I am born of thought.
Within me lies the faunae,
Where instinct can be taught.

I am porn on beta.
I am crystal crap.
Log on for the data,
and stay to bust a cap.

I am lawless order.
I am painless rash.
To linger on the border,
in the Aethyr of Johnny Cash.

I am the bastard noodle.
I am the yellow bag.
Take this bloated poodle,
and tie him with this tag.

I am neural network.
I am frosted pork.
In the darkness may I lurk,
where I'll hunt you with a spork.

I am toe-up tired.
I am lost in space.
To he who I admired,
now all hung up with lace.

I am story captor.
I am silent rage.
To write another chapter,
and tear it from the page.

I am mister mother.
I am gangreenous gash.
I will never find another,
from the Aethyr of Johnny Cash.

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Crash

We've come too late, the time has come,
I drown my faith in vodka and rum,
I turn my back on all I can,
I cannot see this master plan,

Nobody seems to care anymore,
While I'm walking through that door,
I'm taking all my things away,
I don't look back on yesterday.

Sweaty mouse, sticky keyboard,
Stained by a virtual whore,
Clench my fist and close my eyes,
I'm lost in an evanescent paradise.

I'm drowned in sorrow,
Who can live to see tomorrow,
I'm alone, and I don't know why,
I'm stemmed by consciousness, rigged to die.

Psychadelia rainbow swirl,
lock and key and light unfurled,
Scene with iron and candle mirth,
Giving way to my savior's birth.

Deep within, stitched with lace,
My eyes, my mouth, my whole face,
Cannot see this master plan,
End it all, this life of man.

Aethyr of Johnny Cash

LIKE IT... Frikin good Mate !!!

You see add a Drum n bass backing a few hi hats... add some cockney singer and you av a number one hit there...

Errrmmm Got a confession... I made a lame poem like thing a little while back... around 3 years ago... see the link below (I done the words and graphics...)

http://www.stelf.com/los/greenflyanim.swf

Thanks. It's just something I came up with one night after a night of debauchery.

I'll post some more later, just gotta track them down.

i named this one: "i love you"

when i am with you i feel free
when you are with me no one can stand against me
with you i feel so strong
just for you i made this song

i love your smell after you smoke
i love it when other guys you poke
i love you so much it makes me cry
i loved the first time we had a try

i love you more than life
i love you with a knife
being with you is great fun
i love you my dear gun.

never saw it coming did ya? :^^:

never saw it coming did ya? :^^:

He said' NEVER SAW IT COMING DID YA' if oyu  couldn't read :^^:
Here's mine:
Elephants IN MY HOUSE!

I'd be happy in a way
If a elephant child came to stay
He could stay in my room
He wouldn;t cause no doom
If the mother came to stay
dad wouldn't mind in any way
Out of animal, he loves elephants best
The mother could stay in the garage as a guest
The garage is big, the mother need not saty bent
She didn't have to pay us rent
But i wonder what my mom would say
If the elephant's FATHER CAME TO STAY![/b]

here is my version of elephants in my house:

i'd be happy in more than one way
if the big fat weirdo i could slay
i'll hang it's head in my room
he can watch me play doom.

if my mom has anything to say
why would i care? it's her i want to slay
she eats everything that with food have to do
once she almost ate the fridge too.

my dad won't have a problem though
seeing as he was eaten long ago
that's the price you have to pay
if "diet diet" you try and say

there is a lesson to us all
if you eat that much you look like a ball
so don't be shocked when i say
your head in my room will stay.

Walking down the street and coming the other way,
Came a guy called Micheal who's frickin Gay,

As he was mincing down the street,
with The crossing of the feet,

He handed me a Valentines card...
I hit in d face and hit him hard....

His legs went higher than is head,
I hit him so hard I am supprised he aint dead.

Opend the card and this is what it said:-
Would you be so kind and take my sister to Bed !!!#

Again let me stress I have nothing against Gay's...LOL

Here's one I wrote for my girlfriend

I wish you could
See yourself
The way I see you

What if today
You could see yourself
The way that I see you?

I wish I could
Somehow take you back
And show you for a moment
The beautiful girl you are
Who won my heart forever
The first time I held you
In my arms

I wish I could
Somehow take you back
To that very first day we meet
Or any other time
When seeing your smile
Brightened my world

What if on any given day
You could see yourself
The way that I see you?

Then you would always know
Without a doubt
How much I have loved
Watching you change
And become that special girl
I knew you could be

Free-verse poem

War in the sky

A thunderstorm, a heavenly war
always violent
always full of fury
always... deadly

Up there,
  The Lightning... is the fires of countless homes burning to ashes
  The Thunder... is the blasts of thousands of mighty cannons
  and the Rain... is the blood... ill shed by the ravages of war...

But...
In the end... is the sunny sky...
the end of the war.