[Music] A bit of my work

I've been lurking for a bit, until I got a few songs polished up.
Let me know what you think.

http://holkeye.crankeye.org/compositions/RopholK/Secret%237.mp3
http://holkeye.crankeye.org/compositions/RopholK/Coriolis.mp3

Feedback is greatly appreciated.

I've heard some of your stuff from Silverline, and it was awesome. Unfortunately right now my speakers are BROKEN, and I'll have to wait a while to listen to these.  :'(

Although I do recommend you other peoples check these out.

Thanks for the kind words, though it looks like nobody will help a newbie, lol. Here's hoping you get speakers soon, to listen, and to more importantly write. ~

Hey, wow. These are pretty damn good. I like 'em.

Thanks, I appreciate you checking them out. ^^

I really like the way you structure your songs. I'm not quite sure why, it's not anything special, but it just feels like it flows really well to me.

They're both pretty relaxing; something I could listen to for a while.

Thanks, I just kind of write, and whatever comes out, comes out. I think the structure comes from me being a drummer. I like interlacing rhythms and such.

Im not a great musician, just find out movie songs on the piano/flute lol..yeah flute dont laugh. (-.-')
But even the guy who doesnt know the m of music(i know till the first i !!!) can tell that this is downright amazing.

I like the bongo drum things in the first one.