Following The Voices

[springymabob]

Hey people here is my NEW Project the last one I decided to cancell cause it wasn't getting anywhere.
Okay the Demo is ready Ver.1.3! Link: http://files.filefront.com/Following_The_Voiceexe/;6184629;;/fileinfo.html
Story Line:
Well this is the bad part.... On the demo the story line hasn't begun... Cause once you get to bed the story starts to begin...
Well anyways Imoune hears Voices in his dreams.... Bad Voices Clams Voices... and even... Screaming. These voices he hears he sees them in his Journeys.... Like example: He hears a little girl screaming.... Later on he goes to a village theres a house on fire... Theres a little girl screaming inside he has to rescue her.

Characters:
Name: Imoune
Class: Swordsmen
Image: N/A

Name: Amy
Class: Lancer
Image: N/A

Name: Yumi
Class: Hunter
Image: N/A

Screen Shots:

[Winged]

The story needs a bit of work, the character Aluxes is being used (Arshes if PK) which ALOT of rmrk members hate, I advise you to at least change him before some Arshes haters flame, if you don't mind the heat then follow to your hearts content.

The window skin is alright but the rest is default and maps need a bit of work. It doesn't look to interesting yet but it'll work out if some more effort is put into it, examples:

1) Looking for recourses on the net

2) Improving the story line

3) Different battle system or an add on (example would be the KCG camera zoom used in Chaos Project- Nemesis Wrath)

And so on.

~Winged

[lost]

The story needs a bit of work, the character Aluxes is being used (Arshes if PK) which ALOT of rmrk members hate, I advise you to at least change him before some Arshes haters flame, if you don't mind the heat then follow to your hearts content.

The window skin is alright but the rest is default and maps need a bit of work. It doesn't look to interesting yet but it'll work out if some more effort is put into it, examples:

1) Looking for recourses on the net

2) Improving the story line

3) Different battle system or an add on (example would be the KCG camera zoom used in Chaos Project- Nemesis Wrath)

And so on.

~Winged

Why can't he just make a game to make the game? No frills. The game engine is perfectly good as a stand alone, but yes the story does need work.

[springymabob]

The story needs a bit of work, the character Aluxes is being used (Arshes if PK) which ALOT of rmrk members hate, I advise you to at least change him before some Arshes haters flame, if you don't mind the heat then follow to your hearts content.

The window skin is alright but the rest is default and maps need a bit of work. It doesn't look to interesting yet but it'll work out if some more effort is put into it, examples:

1) Looking for recourses on the net

2) Improving the story line

3) Different battle system or an add on (example would be the KCG camera zoom used in Chaos Project- Nemesis Wrath)

And so on.

~Winged

The story needs a bit of work, the character Aluxes is being used (Arshes if PK) which ALOT of rmrk members hate, I advise you to at least change him before some Arshes haters flame, if you don't mind the heat then follow to your hearts content.

The window skin is alright but the rest is default and maps need a bit of work. It doesn't look to interesting yet but it'll work out if some more effort is put into it, examples:

1) Looking for recourses on the net

2) Improving the story line

3) Different battle system or an add on (example would be the KCG camera zoom used in Chaos Project- Nemesis Wrath)

And so on.

~Winged

Why can't he just make a game to make the game? No frills. The game engine is perfectly good as a stand alone, but yes the story does need work.

I know everyone hates the Arshes character remember i started this game a couple of days ago. So I am gonna find new sprites for all the characters.
This is my first RPG Project I will be creating so give me some tips

[:)]

looks good, but will you be using that battle system? it is the defult one right?

[Winged]

I know everyone hates the Arshes character remember i started this game a couple of days ago. So I am gonna find new sprites for all the characters.
This is my first RPG Project I will be creating so give me some tips

Nice idea, good luck with your first, I remember my first and it was 100% RTP, then I got a lot more effort into it and now some people are actually impressed by the first going to be completed project.

So the bottom line is, everyone has to start at the "newbie" point before entering the "professional" point, take it slow and make your way up at a comfortable pace!

Since it is your first project, the default battle system would be alright, but add-ons should be used for a more fun battle experience. Some great non-RTP monsters are out there for download and they look awsome, so look around for those to. Always learn from your mistakes, never let them take over you. Well thats enough of a lecture from me...bye~

~Winged

[Blizzard]

Add a character plot. Tell us something about the characters.