[Music] Everybody else is posting unfinished musix, so I will, too

This isn't RPG stuff. This is for my "Something in the Atmosphere" album, so, obviously, it's an atmospheric, groovin kind of piece.

AND BY GOD IT EVEN HAS (some) LYRICS!

Verse [0:28]:
Follow me.
I'll lead you up onto the rooftops. (yeaa-ah haaah ... wo-o-oh)
Just close your eyes.
And let me sing you something beautiful. (Hum along with guitar lick)
Past the skyline.
Where stars and neon lights melt into the night. (yea-e-yea-ah)
....[lol unfinished]


[~1:22]

Lower voice: Why don't you
Upper voice: Why don't you

Pre-Chorus [1:23]:

Lower: come ... tonight ... tonight ... tonight ... to-night ... come on by ... watch the sky ... see the streams of starlight.
Upper: come ... on .......... by ........... stay  .... to-night ... tonight ..........tonight ............. see the streams of starlight.

(repeats)

[1:50]

vocals together again

tonight ... it's fine .... we'll fly ... past the ci----ty lights ... alone.

just you ... and me ... we'll be ... so free ... and see ... all there is to see....




...

lol, that's it for the lyrics.

The song's pretty much laid out, it just needs some variation and the chorus needs vocals, and I need some soloage or filler, and I may actually just have an abrupt ending like that, who knows runon sentence.

So, yeah, what do you guys think?




edit: If you wanna write lyrics for me, go ahead. lol

I'm guessing it's likely you have tabit versions of the tracks in your demo, thus linked via my signature.

I'm on linux right now so I CAN'T PLAY MIDIS LOL

Yeah, but only for the first 3. Wanderlust was never released on TabIt, and the Finale was improved out of my ass.

GET OFF LINUX YOU DINK AND LISTEN TO MIDI MUZIX

Ok listening now, I'll like totally edit this post when it's done

I like recording stuff too :roll:

[edit] I'd make love with you to this music

Very nice, I like the style~

thx thx


bump bump


post post

I really like the bass line, I'm not so good at writing bass parts usually. It has lots of accents and color to it to keep it interesting as well. Pretty cool.

I can do Bass if I sit down and think about it, but I can't do drums. Oddly enough, I can PLAY the drums, but not the Bass!

I used to suck at everything but I practiced and now I'm pretty good.

I can't read music. I don't know why, I've taken classes and stuff, I just can't do it.

I CAN however, play by ear. Gimme any instrument, some basic instructions, and a recording, and I can copy the basic melody within the day.

Arlyan, can you attach a tab?

Absolutely.

oh my god, zoidberg dances to it!

That is AWESOME. Dancing Zoidberg's got beat!

The comments were my favorite part of that tab. Awesome stuff though, your new album is going to be sick.

On a different note, your solo in that Counting the Seconds demo CD thing was AWESOME. EFFING AWESOME.

On another different note, can you put in a good word for me to JR? I'd like to become a tab area mod and clean up this recent mess.

Or put in a word to JR about proper volume MIDI instructions

Or you can learn Delphi, then ask Jr for the source code and do it yourself.