My first song...... Trainreckish? lmao

[BPKS0]

http://files.filefront.com/Title_Musicmid/;4531375;;/fileinfo.html


Tell me wut u think of my first song lol

[Captain Callahan]

I think it is good, but not as good as others i have heard but still good. Good job!

[BPKS0]

Oo good how?........... lol

[Captain Callahan]

Well the beginning to be starts out to high, but it still like it, make it start slow kinda then gets faster then ends slow, i was wondering could me use this in thy game me making?

[eternal_renegade]

Im sorry but I laughed when I heard this, no offense, i mean it is your first song. But there is no unison-structure. It felt like you just threw it on the floor and kicked it together. The whole thing really is a big mess. Start simple, stay simple simple for awhile so you can develop solid peices. Dont try to jump the grand canyon, you need to take the smallest steps there.

[BPKS0]

U can use it in ur game if u want lol and ummmmmmm it wasnt sposed to be unison it was supposed to be how it is.............. lol I think it sounds ok.... except for a few parts were notes are held out and the out of unison is just outa controll me and my cousin are editing it.