My first song...... Trainreckish? lmao

http://files.filefront.com/Title_Musicmid/;4531375;;/fileinfo.html


Tell me wut u think of my first song lol

I think it is good, but not as good as others i have heard but still good. Good job!

Oo good how?........... lol

Well the beginning to be starts out to high, but it still like it, make it start slow kinda then gets faster then ends slow, i was wondering could me use this in thy game me making?

Im sorry but I laughed when I heard this, no offense, i mean it is your first song. But there is no unison-structure. It felt like you just threw it on the floor and kicked it together. The whole thing really is a big mess. Start simple, stay simple simple for awhile so you can develop solid peices. Dont try to jump the grand canyon, you need to take the smallest steps there.

U can use it in ur game if u want lol and ummmmmmm it wasnt sposed to be unison it was supposed to be how it is.............. lol I think it sounds ok.... except for a few parts were notes are held out and the out of unison is just outa controll me and my cousin are editing it.