[Music] First Piece of Music in Long Time

[Jonesy]

Hey guys,

Been playing around with some music today, came up with this. Was hoping to get some feedback from you guys, on how to improve it, etc.

(I know it's not the best, I know next to nothing about musical theory, but yeah)

[mp3]http://rmrk.net/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=40836.0;attach=21812.mp3[/mp3]

[Alfsong]

Hey very nice piece of music you have there. What I would recomend is adding more background to the beginnign because just the one string makes it sound a bit off. Otherwise very nice piece!