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Tales of Orvank:Eric's fable

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Story
Eric's 17th birthday has been and gone and he is now old enough to become a wanderer and go in search
of exitement and adventure,but it couldn't have happened at a worse time,the evil dragon Gourjaru
has finally grown in power and is now a huge threat to the world,but will his and Eric's destinies
Somehow link in the end,No-one knows......


Characters
Eric black
Age:17 (34 later in the story line)
Race:Human
Class:Wanderer (Guardian later in the storyline)
Bio:Eric was born in the town of rivendock,when he reached the age of 17 he was sent to train in the tutorial realm,but after emerging from that victorious,he returns to see his parents.

Goujaru
Age:Unknown
Race:Dragon
Class:Dragon
Bio:Gourjaru is the lord of all dragons and a very powerful foe,but he has a history that might suggest why he is evil.


Features
Classic item pickup system (WAlk over a item to collect it)
Play as good and evil

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Demo (Only the tutorial bit) http://www.megaupload.com/?d=IYCCRM6U                                 
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Looks stupid~
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Why do I have the feeling that eight magical crystals are also involved, Phillip?


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Why do I have the feeling that eight magical crystals are also involved, Phillip?
Because they're not
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Listen guys,just coz i have a bad reputtation,it don't stop this game form being good like
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Wow. The "screenshot" that you linked to is a blank file, and the link to the demo goes to a 68kb .exe that doesn't even do anything. Kudos to you Phil, you almost exceeded my expectations.

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Wow. The "screenshot" that you linked to is a blank file, and the link to the demo goes to a 68kb .exe that doesn't even do anything. Kudos to you Phil, you almost exceeded my expectations.
didn't u play the demo?
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You can't just upload the game.exe file.
In the editor go to - File > Compress game data -
i did,it should work...
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LOL

All you loaded up was the game.exe from the folder.
When you compress game data, it makes a game exe package that shows the RGSS orange cog with green arrows, that's the one you want to upload.

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You should put up some screenshots.

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Well to be honest, I wouldn't try the game because the story is just well very weak. It's very generic something someone could come up with in no time, the main character doesn't really appeal to me from what you have typed up. An evil dragon, come on now thats the oldest thing in the book not to mention he has a name close to plenty other dragons(Thank god at least its not something like Draco).

The screenshots I can't see anything, you need to fix them. Many people will judge a game on its screenshots alone, then you have a lot of typing errors (mind you I use commas too much it appears, and I make quite a lot of mistakes myself) right now seeing your replies I don't suppose you used much capitlization, did you?

The features...They are meh. Not something to really make anyone want in on the game, just walking over an item what if its a deadly poison when picked up it kills the player just because he picks it up. Just some thoughts to put in.

In other words, you need to be more detailed, fix the grammar problems you have, put up some screenshots (Because for all we know they could be very crappy), and so on. This is as cronstructive as I'm going to get at this time being.
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Isn't it so that you don't share your projects with rmrk anymore?
You stated so in this topic:
http://forum.chaos-project.com/index.php/topic,5089.0.html


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Isn't it so that you don't share your projects with rmrk anymore?
You stated so in this topic:
http://forum.chaos-project.com/index.php/topic,5089.0.html


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i aint a she,the moderators were pissin around and changed ma name and everything
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Well who's fault was that?

Anyways back on topic.


You seem to have an interesting idea here, just, are you actually going to stick to this project? I think I saw about two or three other projects that you started and then just quit altogether.

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Well who's fault was that?

Anyways back on topic.


You seem to have an interesting idea here, just, are you actually going to stick to this project? I think I saw about two or three other projects that you started and then just quit altogether.
i dunno maybe i'll stick to it
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That means no.

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lol NAMKCOR

Anyways "I dunno maybe ill stick to it" isn't too good. In my opinion, it seems like you come up with your storylines a little too fast. Like it's just a flash idea that loses its flare real fast. I would advise coming up with a plot and then continuously rework it, tweak it, modify it, correct it till it takes the shape that you want. If you don't have much enthusiasm for your story, your project will most likely fail.

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lol NAMKCOR

Anyways "I dunno maybe ill stick to it" isn't too good. In my opinion, it seems like you come up with your storylines a little too fast. Like it's just a flash idea that loses its flare real fast. I would advise coming up with a plot and then continuously rework it, tweak it, modify it, correct it till it takes the shape that you want. If you don't have much enthusiasm for your story, your project will most likely fail.
see this is the kind of good criticism i wanted,not the sort grafikal and karo rushe do
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We don't bother to give you that type of criticism because people who know you actually as Phillip1776 ( orwhatever the number was) remember that you've almost literally made dozens of such project threads that were obviously well beyond your capability, all back to back with horrid grammar running rampant in each thread and clearly not a hint of skill up your sleeves. So, almost no one is going to take your game making ability seriously anymore.




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We don't bother to give you that type of criticism because people who know you actually as Phillip1776 ( orwhatever the number was) remember that you've almost literally made dozens of such project threads that were obviously well beyond your capability, all back to back with horrid grammar running rampant in each thread and clearly not a hint of skill up your sleeves. So, almost no one is going to take your game making ability seriously anymore.
on the ream crafter forums they do and i only ever get constructive criticism
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lol, realmcrafter.

post some screenshots then.

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lol, realmcrafter.

post some screenshots then.
i aint done screenshots for my RC game coz i might move onto big world tech engine instead
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lol, realmcrafter.

post some screenshots then.
i aint done screenshots for my RC game coz i might move onto big world tech engine instead
lol, realmcrafter.

post some screenshots then.
i aint done screenshots for my RC game coz i might move onto big world tech engine instead

I mean for this one.

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