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Force Arms: Secret of Avalon

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I can't exactly say that this is a brand spankin' new project considering I've resurrected it about four times over the past years. Now I'm hoping that it will make its grand entrance.

The storyline
The setting is on the planet earth in the year 3000. The very surface of the planet was altered in a near cataclysm due to the nuclear war, known as Revelation. Since then, several of the earth's land masses have shifted position and the world was reformed. Gradually, new cities were build and new countries were named. The central country, known as Vemus was separated into five divisions due to its massive size. Each division is governed by it's own division leader. Attempting to learn from the humanity's past mistakes, 10 years later, on using nuclear warfare, the research to creating a more effective type of weapon that would give no major consequences to its use. The program was conducted by a well known biological research center known as Avalon, popular for several of their scientific breakthroughs prior to Revelation. Avalon's location is in the Fifth Division of Vemus. The project was given the name "Force Arms" merging two of Avalon's original projects such as the BioMech (Effective mechanical replacements for human organs and body parts) and Psykinesis (Concentration of brainwaves to manipulate the surrounding environment). The goal was to create a super soldier that would have the durability of any mechanical weapon along with a sharp mind and enhanced reflexes. Near the end of the decade, Avalon requested volunteers to test the infusions. Before the biomechanical infusion could be done, the psykinetic abilities had to be infused into the user to enhance the brain signals sent to mechanical body parts. The infusion was done by immersion in a special chemical mix that would be absorbed through the skin's pores. The biomechanical additions were due the following year after the test volunteers were given a chance to get accustomed to their newly acquired powers. However, 8 months into the wait period, a reported side effect in the psykinetic infusion caused panic. Apparently, one of the Super Soldier candidates had lost control of the brain signals being sent to his nerves and had ended up killing 8 of the scientists studying him before escaping the facility. For the next two years, the populus was ordered to stay alert to any abnormal activity while the local police forces were ordered to capture the escapee. Following the election of the newest Division leader of the Fifth Division, a new order was given. All of the participants in the "Force Arms" project were to be hunted down and executed as they posed too great a threat to the population.

(This is where the history ends and the story begins)

Zach Truman, a 16 year old High School student, is trying to live his normal life. He goes to school, meets friends and even does some errands around the city. However, on some nights, one memory comes back to haunt him in his dreams. The memory of his own father, forced to flee the country or face his own death. His father was a participant in the "Force Arms" project and the powers he had been given had been inherited to his own son. Zach fears that one day, his curse may bring about his own death as well. However, one day, he is given the opportunity to make things right. To find the cause of everything. To find out why psykinetic users were considered a threat to society. In the search for truth about his father's past, he joins an underground rebellion group intent on helping other secret psykinetic users better understand their abilities and try to abolish the unjust law.

Game features
-Default battle system with a limit break system
-Skill limitations depending on area
-Scrap item trading post
-Game Clear save data (reused for replays)
(Other features will be in the game but not mentioned here for spoiler reasons)

Is there any way I can improve on this?

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Umm.. hello? Could I please have some feedback?

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Gate of Darkness
well the srory ok but we need to see some screenshots or videos
Current Project Gate of Darkness visit at RPG RPG Revolution to see and DEMO COMING SOON

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Yeah, this isn't a Project topic, it's an idea topic. No way of telling you're working on it besides some planned features and a rough plot. So start actually doing something and I'd be glad to move it to the Projects forum.

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Wasn't this section meant for new ideas or stories still in the works?

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Yeah, I'm telling you that I would move it to the actual "Projects" forum when it becomes a working project. Right now it is only ideas or stories in the works which is why it's going to stay in the "New Projects" forum.

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Umm, I wasn't requesting it to be moved to the new projects forum. I revamped the whole thing. I was just wondering if I could get some feedback on the story.