[RMVX] Ether Myth: Element Birth

[size=17]Note: Before reading, I'm not good at english grammar[/size]
Story

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In the Kingdom of Valhurst, when the Ether was born, it scattered seven elements and it gave them to those who deserved the gifts. However, the Ether will take a hero's life, without notice, if he abuses his gift and uses it for his own gain.

Flama, the first element, was rumored to be a gift that could be used for fire work and was given by the God of Fire, Ifrit.

Novus, said to be the most intelligent gift, came from the God of Ice, Shiva.

From beneath the Earth, Gaia, used for mining, came from the God Titan.

The God of Wind, Zephyrus, gave the gift Sylphair; which, granted the gift of flight and control of the wind.

Thundal, said to be striking and sharp, was a gift given by the God of Thunder, Zeus, to control even the most powerful lightning.

Diablos, the darkest gift, prevented the Ether from killing the owner but required that the owner be full of anguish and guilt.

But the greatest gift, Luxas, was astonishing and shone. This gift would grant your wishes but only if you could draw the Divine Holy Saber.

Now, the seven must train to protect the world for the last invasion of the Uroboros Spawns.

World Story

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As the lands of Valhurst decays, the world is gripped by menace and darkness. However, the prophecy that Azura foretold "There will be warriors who will destroy the shadow and bring peace to us all!".

12 Years Later, a warrior finally appeared. His name was Thykel and his came sister, Ariesa, they were separated from each other after a disastrous event. Azura had also foretold that the warrior's name would start with the letter “T”. The Elders wondered, “Is Thykel the one?”

Characters

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Thykel Riverbane
Ragnarok
Apr 12
170.6 cm
79.5 kg

Thykel, grew up from the 'known' territory of the Ragnarok Clan, With so much torturing .. Thykel decided to leave his clan with his sister, Now.. They found Regis Village as their town.. His sister left Regis and finds a work.. Thykel uses spears piercing enemies making holes into it, After the Ether spread the seven elements, Thykel was accidentally possessed by a 'Water Dinosaur' also called Novus, which in this time, is still in him.. The element helped him train and gave him hope to retrieve Gaia Orb from the Diablos.


Ariesa Riverbane
Ragnarok
Jan 14
169.5 cm
68.2 kg

Ariesa, an industrious Thykel's sister, She works hard to earn 'Kin' a currency of Serdin.. She uses magic and a wand to cast magic on enemies.


Aske Grave Ice
Midgarok
Oct 31
176.4 cm
76.2 kg

Aske, one of the greatest warriors of Midgarok.. also, he is the holder of the Gaia Orb.. which keeps Regis from dying.. He uses swords to slash enemies into bits.

-More Characters To Come-

Screenshots

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[Description: Regis Village]


[Description: Hollow Forest]


[Description: Thykel's (Ware)House]


[Description: Battle System (WIP)]


[Description: Cassiopei Route]

The Clans

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The most well known clan in Serdin, Ragnarok consists of four families.. Riverbane,Aerosword,Flamesin & Gaiahand.

They're also known for their perfect combat skills which makes them the top clan every tournament of Serdin.



An alliance of Ragnarok, This clan contains of three families that are very good at magic skills, However.. they won't go down without a fight.

Midgarok are also famous for making staffs and spread them all over Serdin.



Laventar, the most aggressive weak clan in Serdin.. But, this clan has the Diablos Element which makes them powerful for a certain time.. this clan has 2 families, the Darkair & Shadowflame.

They are capable of summoning creatures from other dimension.

Features

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- Over 60 Weapons and Armors to use!
- Cool Mappings!
- Item Crafting << Coming Soon
- Teleport Systems
- Different Puzzles to be solved!
- A chock-a-full sidequests!
- Unique and Edited Sprites (by Radscythe)
- Balanced Items,Weapons,Enemies etc!
- Fishing Fully-Evented (by shadwblitz)

Special Thanks To:

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KGC Scripts Library
Yanfly's Scripts
Woratana's Scripts
Modern Algebra's Scripts
Original Wij AAMWP
Light Effects by Kylock
Fishing Event by shadwblitz
Character Sprites by Radscythe
Faces by blackscrap
Monsters by Milano Cat

Feel free to comment!~

  great face set and mapping!

I was going to criticize your English, but then I read your disclaimer. Anyway, down to business.

I like your story, even if it contains trace elements that I have seen time and time again. You also named the gods of this world after gods from Greek mythology; I'm not sure how I feel about this. You also neglected to mention the importance of the different clans. Some extra information would have been much appreciated.

Also, no offense intended, but I am rather unimpressed with your mapping. They're quite plain, and in some cases repetetive. Your battle system could also use some work.

Harsh criticism aside, I see potential in this. Good luck with it, and I hope to see more in the future.