[Writing] End of The Circle

Have an generic poetry;


I.V., cold, grey hand
Weak, no strength, can’t stand
Not my bed, pristine white
Mouth feels full of sand

Sprawled, I need to write
Last chance to write, tonight
I’ve no tears left to weep
Didn’t go without a fight

Life support with slowing beep
Bed is dark, covers are deep
Death coming, for my soul to reap
Maternity ward cries.  Smile.  Sleep.

Used the format from Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening?

Well, I like it. :3

Used the format from Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening?

Well, I like it. :3

I used the rhyming scheme, I'm not sure if the syllable structure I used is the same though.