The Story of Silly Kid (A Practice Game)

Hello everyone. I'm Redfire313. I've just got a of RPG Maker XP. I've gone over some tutorials, and I know basic RPG Maker skills. I'm making this game to improve my skills and get some criticism. It has almost not story at all, cus its practice. I'm quite a good story maker, so in later games the story wil be better. Anyways, here it is.

Story:
You awaken to find yourself in a forest. You have no idea where you are, or how you got there. In fact, you don't remeber anything at all. This is your quest to find your memory, and get back home...


I'll update the other stuff later.

Sounds like an ok start I guess, but you should add more details. Even a practice game should have a decent story, cause that'll help you practice your story-writing as well

add some screenshots. 

that too, screenshots rule

This topic should not exist. There's absolutely nothing here.

lol much better than any of my stories.