not bad for a first game, the thing that annoys me most about this game is the linking between the maps, IMO maps should be linked entirely up the "spine". I have a nice easy fix for you, copy and paste. --no harshness intented--.
The thing I liked most about this game was the girl that gives you the iron armour ("man she's hot"). LOL LOVELY, although would have preffered an actual cuter char.
Overall rating: 7.4/10
idea rating: 8/10
humour rating: 9/10
technical ability: 6/10 (because of unlinked spines)
Still a good first game.