Vx story: Paradise lost

Note: this game is giving a story to the default actor of rpg maker vx but with a little changes to the characters. it is also my first game.

Plot:Ralph a new soldier in Jaketopia elite group called "guardian" he got his first mission which was to return to his home town Gij to take out a target who is part of secret organisation. Well there he find out that no one there remember him. After returning to head quarter he get send to guard little villi from a attack there he meet Clara a young white mage who change his life. He soon set out to find out why no one in his past remember and even if he actually exist.

Paradise: A world created by the gods a promist land to the jaketopians but soon turning into hell when corruption spread thru disease, war, and drastic climat changes. Being the seventh and final life phase of the world.

Jaketopian believe:

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Creation of paradise: the jaketopian believe that the world will be reborn seventh time and each life phase start out good will be detroy by the god if they notive that the world become corrupt. With each life civilian starting out peacefull and kind they  soon turn into sinful corrupt beings

Prophecy: a great prophet claimed that the world could be restored to the way it started if a forgotten hero fought the god and win

Charaters:

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heros:

Ralph
Starter class: Paladin
age:18
specialty: Crit bonus
Birthplace: Villi
Bio: classified

Ulrika Lajoie
Starter class: warrior
Birthplace: Little Villi
age:16
specialty:none
Bio: born in Little villi when it was just starting out she soon learned how to take care of her self and started killing monster when she was 10. When she was 11 Ralph help her when she got flooded by slime she soon become best friend with him and join the villi military group with him. But they soon split up when Ralph got promoted into guardian and she didnt.

Clara Belle
Starter class: white mage
age:17
birthplace: Lazine palace
Specialty: super guard, pharmacology
Bio: Clara was born in royalty but soon left her family at the age of 15 when she learnt that her dad King Koke was a war monger. She fled to the holy land of jaketopia where she pledge alliance to the land she soon moved to little villi where she become a white mage and teached first aid at the church in little villi.

Ylva Loke
starter class:magician
age:18
birthplace:Lopi
specialty:none
Bio: Ylva was born in the woodland of Lopi and learn magic from her grandma Lopi who led the great civilization when she was younger. She become captive to the land the warmonger Koke now inhabit.

Sir Lawrence the great of Villi (Lawrence Cure)
Starter class: knight
age:37
Birthplace: Villi outsirks
Specialty: super guard, pharmacology, crit bonus
Bio: Lawrence lived a life of pleasure as the son of a famous knight but soon after he is sent to Villi by his father with a note to the king that say "My name is Sir Lajuste the guardian of Villi. My son Lawrence who present you this letter is to either be accepted in the military or to be hung" the king couldnt let Lajuste son be hung so lawrence soon become knight and took after his father by being the first member to rank Guardian in there first year.

Lance rave
Starter class: dark knight
age: classified
Birthplace: unknown
specialty: superguard, crit bonus
bio: Classified

Vera Wysh
Starter class: grappler
Age: 14
Birthplace: Jaketopia
specialty: dual wield, superguard, crit bonus
Bio: Classified

Elmer Wysh
starter class: thief
Age:19
Birthplace: jaketopia
specialty: dual wield, pharmacology, crit bonus
Bio: born in the holy land his father was the holy knight jcou he soon left by is wishes for anarchy and he seen the world corruption of feudalism and monarchy and created anarchist movement CAJAV(crusade against jaketopia and villi)

known villian:

King Lazine(koke lazine)
title: warmonger
age:50
Birthplace: Villi
Bio: Born in villi he soon left to settle in another land with other who agree on the corruption of Villi but soon lead one of the most corrupt nation in all of Paradise.

Other:

King Jcou the holy knight of Paradise( Jcou wysh)
age: 39
birthplace: Paradise
Bio: Being born as prince because his grandpa founded villi and introduce jakopianism to the native of the land. He soon fought in the great war and became king when his father died. he is belived to be descend by the gods who protected the wysh's for centuries.

Main organisation:

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Guardian
Creator: Classified
leader: Jcou Wysh
Alliance: Jaketopia, Villi
Bio: Known as the most powerful military group in all of Paradise they choose there member from Villi military group becoming of one it member is the highest perstige in all of jaketopia and it alliance's teritory. It was created to run secret mission by the Vatican in jaketopia and to guard importan city in it nation.

Lazine royal military
creator: king lazine
leader: sIr reginald
Alliance: Lazine territory
Bio: created for the protection of the land of lazine not much is know of this group.

Villi military
Creator: King Villi the first(Kilo Villi)
Leader: Lawrence cure
Alliance:Villi territories
Bio: Created for the protection of villi but soon lost moral when villi was invade and left in ruins, they become hated  for causing the death of trillion who lived in biggest city in all of Paradise.

CAJAV(crusade against jaketopia and villi)
Creator: Elmer Wysh
Leader: Elmer Wysh
alliance: freelance
Bio creator after realization by oldest son of jcou that fudalisme and monarchy is corrupt they go around stealing important plan and random raid on Villi, Jaketopian and Lazine territory.

Digitalist
Creator: classified
Leader: Classified
Alliance: Freelance
Bio: classified

Chinoj
Creator:  Jade chinoj
leader: Chase Lynn
Alliance: freelance
Bio: A all female group who invade villi and destroyed it they went into low profile after the invasion and tokk refuse in unknown part of Paradise

Importan events:

Villi invasion
Cause: the great war
involved: Villi military, Guardian, monsters, Chinoj.

Lopi invasion
cause: Lazine seperation of Jaketopia
Involve: Lopi nation, lazine royal military
story: the woodland was invade by Lazine who wanted to industrialize the wood he keep the survivor captive in the camp waiting for his wood runner to finnished taking out the forest for he can build new towns.

Creation of CAJAV
cause: fudalism, fundalisme and monarchy
Involve: jaketopia, Elmer Wysh
story: Elmer wysh left royalty to start a anarchist group

Colonisation of Paradise
cause: settlement and over population.
Involve: jaketopianisme
Story: the Great Wysh and other look for new land and eventually made friend with native of this land and with the beautiful scenery they deecided to call this lost land Paradise it is to belive this is the land the god favor.

Features:

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-well develop and rounded character each person will change over time from what they were like when u first met them.
-ability to change classes(maybe depend if i figure to keep the classes same)
-lots of secrets from story to characters to treasure.
- and ect...