[Writing] My Freedom in Chains

[Forty]

My Freedom in Chains

I thought I was free
I thought the chains were lifted
I thought they broke under my might
These chains of loneliness entangled me
They took control of me
They made my heart crash upon me

I thought I was free
I thought I could move on
I thought I did not need them
I was wrong
I ignored the chains
They never left me
If they were to break
They would merely reconstruct
Even stronger then before
I avoided them
I looked past them

I thought I was free
But after she took my heart
I will never be free

[Kathryn]

Okay, i'm not much of a poetry expert, nor am i even passable as a poetry expert, so i can't say much about exucution.


I'm posting here because this is how i feel today .-.

[Forty]

Okay, i'm not much of a poetry expert, nor am i even passable as a poetry expert, so i can't say much about execution.


I'm posting here because this is how i feel today .-.

Or spelling for that matter 
But thanks I guess.

[Kathryn]

sorry man 

Me and spelling is an odd thing, because i'm very terrible at it, yet some people are worse, much worse. scarily worse.

We live in a sad world when people can't spell the most basic of basic words 

I can't think of any examples right now, but i'm thinking of the guy who sits behind me in english and who i always end up being partners with.

This is a long and sorrowful tale that i shall save for later. I don't want to slather any more filth over this poem anymore 

[Nightwolf]

whi du yu think peeple are wurse at spilling, agayn?

I usually like poems that rhyme lol, but this is not bad either =D

[Forty]

I don't like trying to rhyme cause I sounds ten times worse when I try.