DL's HK Sprite(s), Criticism Needed.

I would like some criticism over a half-kaizer sprite I made.

Sasuke Heshina


I'm still not sure if I did the shading right on the clothing, so I'm going to need some opinions if its good, or should I improve it. Also, I've posted it here to see if I did the shading right. After that, I'll be adding more accessories, details, etc to the clothing.

If you wish to be credited over your criticism please say so.

I'm no expert, but I would use it. Looks pretty good to me. The shading looks pretty good. The only thing I can spot is the coat near the bottom... I'm not really sure why, but it looks a little funny. Oh well, good job.

The bottom of the coat on the shoe, making it a bit tilted upwards. Thanks, for the comment.

Sprite Update!
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This is the difference between the two, any comments would be appreciated.

@Kipe: That was just a practice sprite, I'm going to lock since I don't use it anymore.