DL's HK Sprite(s), Criticism Needed.

[DeathLock~]

I would like some criticism over a half-kaizer sprite I made.

Sasuke Heshina


I'm still not sure if I did the shading right on the clothing, so I'm going to need some opinions if its good, or should I improve it. Also, I've posted it here to see if I did the shading right. After that, I'll be adding more accessories, details, etc to the clothing.

If you wish to be credited over your criticism please say so.

[Revo]

I'm no expert, but I would use it. Looks pretty good to me. The shading looks pretty good. The only thing I can spot is the coat near the bottom... I'm not really sure why, but it looks a little funny. Oh well, good job.

[DeathLock~]

The bottom of the coat on the shoe, making it a bit tilted upwards. Thanks, for the comment.

[DeathLock~]

Sprite Update!
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Old:


This is the difference between the two, any comments would be appreciated.

[DeathLock~]

@Kipe: That was just a practice sprite, I'm going to lock since I don't use it anymore.