[Music] Grandnigger Clock

I'm trying to start composing again. I was inspired by the thought of a clown riding on a super fun ride at a carnival at night. The wind is in his face as he goes around and around. He's smiling, yet a little frightened. He's mostly having fun. Food, people, everywhere. Cotton candy fruit etc.

It isn't good, but I'm proud of myself. I need suggestions, improvments, and criticism.

It really did sound like your source of inspiration. Good job.

lol.
This is awesome if you like, just started.





edit: Racist.

I hate to make a moopost, but that's LOL is really all I can say.

I need suggestions, improvments, and criticism.

Very nice for a first. For improvements, just extend upon but try to kinda keep it simple since it's carnival-style music. That's just my opinion.

I was inspired by the thought of a clown riding on a super fun ride at a carnival at night. The wind is in his face as he goes around and around. He's smiling, yet a little frightened. He's mostly having fun. Food, people, everywhere. Cotton candy fruit etc.

Creepy.

I'm still not sure what a GandNIGGER clock is.

Perhaps he meant "Grand Nigger Cock."

Knowing Irock he's seen alot of those.

He's calling it a GrandNIGGER clock because the clown got afraid.

He's calling it a GrandNIGGER clock because the clown got afraid.

wut

Black people aren't scary.

Large men wearing monocles who have power levels over 9000 are scary.

It's Grandnigger clock, with a D.

We know. Nobody left the D out.

Nobody said someone left the D out. I was just pointing out that it has a D.

You're a D. D for Dumdum.

Not bad but the chromatics just don't do it for me.

I still have no clue what a grandnigger clock is. EXPLAIN PLZ!

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The lack of sense that that post made can only mean one thing: mattsaysurmom.

I hope thats not the case.

IP checks as a proxy. Good call Zylos.

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^I thought that was a frightened face.
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Will anyone ever tell me what a grandnigger clock is?